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Offline ShadedExalt

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #180 on: August 26, 2015, 11:37:53 am »
Andromeda is great

I hope it gets to help out sometime in the future.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #181 on: August 26, 2015, 07:49:29 pm »
Soooo... What exactly is it? A Metroid?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #182 on: August 26, 2015, 08:01:31 pm »
Koali, our characters only met about 1 day ago, as far as the story goes. Why do you think Koali has Sister's frequency?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #183 on: August 26, 2015, 10:30:13 pm »
Sister's frequency? I thought it was yours?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #184 on: August 27, 2015, 07:46:34 am »
The heck?! Very weird typo. Still, you don't have the frequency dude.

Also Shaded, would you mind NOT being so abrasive? Popping in to make snarky comments, doesn't actually progress the story. I'm also dealing with a lot of crap irl, and don't need it right now.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #185 on: August 27, 2015, 09:00:27 am »
Well, it was an attempt to reinsert myself into the story.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #186 on: August 27, 2015, 10:17:41 am »
I was trying to do something similar to Koali, actually.

Besides, it's not directed at you, I think the twins are great. 

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #187 on: August 27, 2015, 12:02:02 pm »
I think it has been mentioned that Lorena speaks her mind without thinking of the consequences so that is actually rather in character for her.

While this in a way makes her similar to Reagan in that respect there are a number of differences. For instance Reagan is a professional when it comes to her job, enough so she'll be actively thinking and making sure that her temper doesn't get a hold of her. Lorena on the other hand has her father's penchant for well placed insanity, doing things so out there you have to wonder if it was planned. That said Reagan is not a peoples person, only really getting along with a few people while Lorena is a sneaky sneaky snark thing who actively works to having good natured fun and occasionally annoying people deliberately. There are other things but I'll leave it at that.
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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #188 on: August 27, 2015, 02:50:57 pm »
Secondary note, there seems to be a disconnect on the nature of this rp for some of us. For instance this is not the RP Tavern and in no way connected to it, the posting nature is far too different, and while snappy one liners and single sentence replies will happen things don't simply happen because we say so.

Silliness can happen only if we can make it consistent and not over the top, Andromeda is an example of this. I mean after all we're going to hunt down a cabal of mad scientists who create mutants is a flying squid much worse?

So no, Koali you don't have his radio frequency, you can certainly get it however. Exalt you're more or less alright, though both of you should post more often I hate feeling like we're leaving you out.

And remember, serious, but playful.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #189 on: August 27, 2015, 04:01:35 pm »
I agree with Pieman. I don't WANT you guys left out. But you need to post things that actually progress the story. A few sentences of banter don't do that. And has ANYONE heard of Spades lately?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #190 on: August 27, 2015, 05:08:54 pm »
I don't know, Lorena calling the twins idiots doesn't do much either.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #191 on: August 27, 2015, 08:44:19 pm »
Right then, is my new post better?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #192 on: August 27, 2015, 08:48:27 pm »
Better. Just try and be consistent.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #193 on: August 28, 2015, 03:17:15 am »
And remember, Andromeda is the real hero of this story. Everything we do must perpetuate that narrative.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #194 on: August 28, 2015, 07:55:24 am »
Obviously. Maybe Andy is a product of the Birdmen? A incomplete one, which we find the resources to finish?