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Title: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on February 21, 2015, 11:56:19 am
Apologise for the long delay on putting an ending to the Skies have no Limit, I really can't seem to find time with work. But since a fair amount of people want todo collaboration stories with each other, like with the originally Burning Skies and the Skies have no Limit, I am opening this discussion thread in the Pit for those who want to create boards and wing the plots. Apologise again for the long open in the Skies thread, and to those who want another outlet, I may open the Buring Skies again for just person to person talks. It won't be my actual person, but the three that currently runs it when Azn is out. So just putting this out there.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: QUY on February 21, 2015, 10:34:21 pm
sounds cool cant wait
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on February 23, 2015, 01:07:24 am
I still love you Bdr.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 12, 2015, 07:29:53 pm
Hey Carn and others, use this so you don't have to clutter your respectives RPs with OOC stuff.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: macmacnick on April 12, 2015, 07:35:47 pm
Couldn't you hire Rethburn to put it to a saucy ending, Bdr? I still have the proper summoning ritual procedures and list of items required for you to summon him if needed.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 12, 2015, 09:42:19 pm
Couldn't you hire Rethburn to put it to a saucy ending, Bdr? I still have the proper summoning ritual procedures and list of items required for you to summon him if needed.

What? No, no, nopedy no!! We all know what Rethburn is capable of, literature wise. Having him end The Skies have no Limt is not a good thing. He maybe the Guardian of the Pit, I still remember his previous works. *shivers*  :o
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 06, 2015, 09:25:04 pm
Don't mind the necro, but if you guys willing, I have a side story to go on from the ending of the Skies have no Limit. I won't post as often, only narrate and direct the flow, but how about an adventure south of the Guild and of the know world.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 07, 2015, 10:12:56 am
Any others welcome? Or is it just you narrating?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 07, 2015, 07:54:55 pm
Since I won't post as often, I'll have two others whom I'll PM from time to time with different settings and scenarios. Mainly when I am on at night I'll do a quick time lapse or a summary. But besides the two, it is still open to those who want to join.

Oh and Queso, you should know that all the Cantina's Skies discussions has been in the Pit, but it has been crazy so thanks.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Queso on July 07, 2015, 08:47:45 pm
Take no risks Bdr.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 10, 2015, 06:59:36 pm
It's a risk simply being on an airship.

Are you telling us to uninstall your game?  :o
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 10, 2015, 09:09:55 pm
The airships are a infinitely smaller risk.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 08:32:22 pm
Carn, Koali, we have this for a reason. Try not to clutter the thread. Besides, even my person have hidden blades
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 17, 2015, 08:34:32 pm
This is true, he and I have already cleared that up.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 17, 2015, 08:35:21 pm
Indeed. And if y'all can go out and kill some large wild animals and bring back their femurs, I can rig up some more axes.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 17, 2015, 08:41:16 pm
If we hunt large animals, I'm keeping their femurs as clubs dude.......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 17, 2015, 08:43:35 pm
WITH BLAAAAAADES

Seriously though. Monster femurs make great weapon handles.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 17, 2015, 08:45:53 pm
DERAILMENT ALERT, DERAILMENT ALERT
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 10:04:50 pm
Soo, what to name the transport.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 17, 2015, 10:22:09 pm
I vote we vote on it.

So I recommend we name it Bastion, complete with gruff narrator.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 10:31:39 pm
I recently made a new ship and named it Destor, some derivative of destroyer.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 17, 2015, 10:33:02 pm
Do we have a list of fluff class vessels?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 10:35:34 pm
Fluff class? How so
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 17, 2015, 10:43:28 pm
I mean vessels that are not mentioned in canon. Those sort of things.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 17, 2015, 10:45:34 pm
Bastion is good. What about  The Wayward Wind?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 17, 2015, 11:26:44 pm
Hey, do we have some sort of hub area?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 11:28:39 pm
if you want to start staying on the transport, but we don't have a set tavern/bar
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 17, 2015, 11:30:20 pm
The transport being a capital ship with less guns?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 17, 2015, 11:36:16 pm
It's more of a modified cargo ship that has its belly converted to have it open and close to accommodate smaller airships. Basically a ship tender and command center.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 18, 2015, 02:13:46 am
I did mention a large walk on cargo bay, is that still a thing, we should draw up a blue print or something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 18, 2015, 09:04:18 am
I could see it at the bow, it opens up and there is a gangplank that drop down into the initial hold. Behind that a large bulkhead with several entrances to catwalks that expands across where it stores the ships.

Yeah I think we may need a schematic/blue print.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 18, 2015, 01:21:42 pm
So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 18, 2015, 01:28:56 pm
So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.
Koali, Carn and Alison are both extremely agro. Though they express it differently. Example, if there's a wall they need to get past, Alsion prefers to climb over and kill any guards along the way. Carn prefers to just blow a hole in the wall and walk in.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 08:35:28 am
I suddenly remembered that Amelia comes from a prominent family, as such I've made her a fair bit more formal when she speaks to people she's unfamiliar with, people of authority etc.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 12:47:43 pm
In case anyone wants a more descriptive feel for Jasper, think Hannibal Lector, but replace "cannibal" with "I want to open you up and change how you work."
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 12:59:19 pm
So Bonesaw?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 01:13:48 pm
Don't know that one. Jasper is a medical genius, well versed in psychology, and dabbles in genetics. And extremely sociopathic.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 06:49:48 pm
Well character discussions aside we're going to have to end this day eventually, my characters cannot forward the narrative any more then they have without someone else interacting with them.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 06:56:53 pm
Alison is wandering the ship. Possible run in with Reagan?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 07:08:58 pm
On it, sorry went to a concert yesterday, it was awesome by the way. Hehe Slighty Stoopid and the Dirty Heads, hehe

Also, transport name, what is it?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:10:57 pm
I vote Wayward Winds.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 07:22:39 pm
Lets think representive, we're hunting birds after all.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:25:05 pm
It's also taking us REALLY REALLY far away, wayward.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 07:27:00 pm
But we need to slight them.

Also just had an idea for a post.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:45:18 pm
Well it depends on when and why the ship was originally constructed, it hasn't been said yet if this is its first mission. Also, is Amelia's pet/thing some kind of baby sky octopus?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 07:46:46 pm
Something along those lines, I was thinking more squid like though, if a bit more bulbous to accommodate the lifting gas it produces.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 07:49:16 pm
SKY WHALE!!!!!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 07:50:27 pm
MWAHAHAHAHAHA... Soon Amelia will be queen of her own pod, or something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:52:33 pm
Can we make skywhale riders canon? PLEASE!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 07:54:12 pm
We did make Sir Issac Phillips canon.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:55:49 pm
I wasn't around then.............All i know is that he is credited with the mobula. And was Chaladonian...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 07:56:14 pm
Ok, like I said in the post, the day is over, but we are having night cycles if you want to add more. If there is nothing of importance you want to address, I'll put a simple post to fast forward into the morning. 6-8ish
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 07:57:06 pm
I wasn't around then.............All i know is that he is credited with the mobula. And was Chaladonian...

Squid
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 07:59:23 pm
My bad....also presumably Amelia trying to explain to Carn exactly what is on her arm, and why she should get to keep it, would be funny.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 08:00:16 pm
Thinks of it as like the main day story has ended, but the afternoon and evening goes on.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 08:06:10 pm
I went with evening, we have been moving about a lot and been really productive.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 08:07:55 pm
Should be good, night lights should just turn on about now. And hurray, it not something bad will happen when you have a crazy guy being escorted in by several guards, not like movies I have seen.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 19, 2015, 08:10:15 pm
If we believe he'll be an issue we can just, I don't know remove all his limbs?

 You know, maybe we should contact one Captain Copperfield to join us on this mission.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 08:15:31 pm
If anyone get's to remove Jasper's limbs, its the Anglean with a really big grudge, and an axe to match. I was thinking we chain him to the wall via three chains connected to a collar on his neck.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 08:17:20 pm
Whoa, I'm just pointing this out, I just realised that when I wrot him in, scenes like when Loki or KHan was being escorted, sometime later things go, yeah. Will it be like that who knows, only I can tell.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 08:18:46 pm
Or me, we can have joint control over him. Within reason.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 19, 2015, 08:21:51 pm
It will be interesting on his interactions during the trip.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 19, 2015, 08:27:19 pm
Indeed.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 20, 2015, 12:07:33 am
I seem to have hit an unexpected problem with the Switch Axe mechanism. I'll be needing a week to clear this up.

In other words, I'm headed out of town.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 20, 2015, 07:25:28 am
I've been nominally posting from a phone actually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 20, 2015, 08:11:05 am
I seem to have hit an unexpected problem with the Switch Axe mechanism. I'll be needing a week to clear this up.

In other words, I'm headed out of town.

Uhhh technical issues result in a delay in the ship's departure? Also, starting the 28th, I start at a technical school, so my postings are going to be more infrequent.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 20, 2015, 11:58:40 am
We can do that. I know that we all have personal things to deal with, don't worry about posting as much. I mean myself I'm limited to nights and weekends.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 20, 2015, 12:01:42 pm
Still, thought I should point it out.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 21, 2015, 10:52:09 am
Should I just begin writing weird unrelated in universe things in this thread then? I really can't think of anything to post so I think I'll just do that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: The Mann on July 21, 2015, 01:25:41 pm
Should I just begin writing weird unrelated in universe things in this thread then? I really can't think of anything to post so I think I'll just do that.

Ask that player who made a thread on aliens invading earth, they may be able to give you inspiration  ;D
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 05:51:46 pm
Hey, didn't Bdr say the transport had flak guns?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 07:55:17 pm
I said it had several weapons mounts. Still deciding on how many medium and light weapons it's should have.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 07:58:31 pm
Can it have one massive gun? And Carn get's it? Reagan pilots the thing, so can Carn get a ludicrous gun?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 08:05:40 pm
Still no Village Killers.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 08:09:23 pm
I just mean a legitimate heavy weapon.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 08:16:29 pm
Ok, design time, I need to make a visual sketch of this thing.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 22, 2015, 08:24:45 pm
DAMN IT BDR! I WANT MY BLOODY VILLAGE KILLER!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 08:28:26 pm
Hey, you get to fly the bloody thing.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 09:12:27 pm
Size wise I need room to compare it, I mean it is the size of a Junker.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 09:14:43 pm
Size wise I need room to compare it, I mean it is the size of a Junker.
What? I was under the impression it was MUCH bigger.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 09:18:56 pm
(http://t0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQt-7BfRvLgT8CqA4ZgSnu_-KOUuW9Ju7og2__jhtVHYl1VDX55)
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 09:20:56 pm
Wait, I thought you meant the transport was the size of a junker.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 09:23:12 pm
Wait, I thought you meant the transport was the size of a junker.

What? No, how would it be a ship tender if it was a junker.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 22, 2015, 09:25:19 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 09:27:32 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 22, 2015, 09:54:37 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 22, 2015, 10:02:40 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 22, 2015, 10:03:52 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
ALL MY YES!!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 24, 2015, 05:56:02 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
ALL MY YES!!

JNKRDIS
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 24, 2015, 06:02:35 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
ALL MY YES!!

JNKRDIS

BLARGHLHAMMER!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 24, 2015, 06:03:27 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
ALL MY YES!!

JNKRDIS

BLARGHLHAMMER!

?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 24, 2015, 06:05:34 pm
That is a good question, one I would be inclined to answer with black magic.
Steampunk Timelords? Bigger on the inside and all that?

And what find an old rusted police phonebox from the 60's somewhere in the world.

TIME JUNKER!
ALL MY YES!!

JNKRDIS

BLARGHLHAMMER!

?

I have no idea.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Queso on July 24, 2015, 06:10:50 pm
I thought I moved this out of the pit...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 24, 2015, 06:15:53 pm
It was on topic for the most part cheese master!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 24, 2015, 06:20:43 pm
Then the wibbly wobbly stuff happened............
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 24, 2015, 06:25:18 pm
We are not letting this happen in here. you know how long I had to scroll up when someone quote the quote thread
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 24, 2015, 06:30:05 pm
What about Bacon?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 24, 2015, 09:16:35 pm
Ohhhhh Bacon, the Holy Religion still lives.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 24, 2015, 09:22:11 pm
Indeed sire. On a side note, I'm modifying the squid to be able to drop bombs. The other one was rigging so crew can repel of it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 25, 2015, 12:15:57 am
Hail Bacon Bdr, hail Bacon.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: macmacnick on July 25, 2015, 01:18:26 am
I'm just sitting here, giggling, whilst watching you guys make a full RP and all from something I started in the skies have no limits...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 25, 2015, 01:24:04 am
You know I hate you for that, but it got something going again.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: macmacnick on July 25, 2015, 02:48:47 am
<3 Bdr.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 25, 2015, 06:37:35 am
Mac as much as I love you, go punch yourself.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: macmacnick on July 26, 2015, 04:50:43 am
Hmmmm, when're you goin' to even leave docks?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 07:48:06 am
Relatively soon I hope. Alister and Alison tend to get broody.................
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 26, 2015, 12:29:09 pm
Completely oblivious of the story unfolding around him, Koali sat in Gaige's workshop and sharpened the many switch axes he had built.

XD He feels so left out!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 12:30:55 pm
Completely oblivious of the story unfolding around him, Koali sat in Gaige's workshop and sharpened the many switch axes he had built.

XD He feels so left out!
The price of infrequent posting.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 07:39:26 pm
Soooooo, anyone going to post something?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 26, 2015, 08:06:27 pm
Working on it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 08:12:10 pm
K, didn't know if I needed to double post to keep things moving.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 26, 2015, 08:19:05 pm
Slow day huh?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 26, 2015, 08:27:09 pm
Yeah, been busy. But we should be heading off by the end of day 3
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 08:27:57 pm
Ok then. If we have to drag this out...........I don't want Alister to get bored..............Things might blow up.........
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 26, 2015, 08:29:34 pm
Once we are out there, I have many surprises and goodies
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 08:30:57 pm
I just want Alister to go full berserker on a few birdmen. I'm not asking for much.......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 26, 2015, 09:17:22 pm
Wall of text achieved.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 09:29:40 pm
Aaaaannd replied. For anyone who is interested, I've loosely based Alison's personality on Tex from Red versus Blue.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 26, 2015, 09:32:47 pm
Reagan has Auburn colored hair, Amelia is blond.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 26, 2015, 09:34:38 pm
Oops. I forgot it was Reagan in there. I'll go fix that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 27, 2015, 12:39:19 am
Right, so when are we going to fight the mutant things?

More importantly, when are you guys going to come grab an axe?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 27, 2015, 01:03:07 am
Day or two? You should probably begin stowing equipment and the like on the ship before we leave.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 27, 2015, 07:10:09 am
Right, so when are we going to fight the mutant things?

More importantly, when are you guys going to come grab an axe?
Carn already has an axe, Alison doesn't use big weapons, but the twins may be interested. But none of them have even seen this switch axe. Only Koali and Gaige.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 27, 2015, 01:17:12 pm
I guess it's time to show it off. Someone get me a bunch of watermelons!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 28, 2015, 01:21:46 pm
Chainsword isn't the main melee I'll be using, just a sort of boarding/when-I-really-need-to-kill-something-undeniably-dead weapon.

Think you can fix a gun in the middle of combat that's had it's barrels shorn off and it's inner workings cleaved near in two?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 28, 2015, 01:37:45 pm
Meh, axe to gun mounts. Axe wins, problem solved.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 28, 2015, 01:46:18 pm
In one go?

Probably not.

And you can't sever the struts connecting a Goldfish's main engine with an axe.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 28, 2015, 01:56:21 pm
True, but I can severely damage the shaft and fuel lines. And a gun mount that's cut halfway, is liable to break when next used. Possibly harming the gunner.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 28, 2015, 02:38:38 pm
Wait a minute, I thought we were talking about FIXING guns!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 28, 2015, 02:54:08 pm
How would a boarding axe or chainsword fix a gun?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 28, 2015, 03:00:02 pm
Well say there is a pesky gatling firing down on us and they don't realize you're standing right there next to them. An axe will fix that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 28, 2015, 03:05:24 pm
I consider that fixing a problem involving a gun, rather than fixing a gun.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on July 28, 2015, 03:24:10 pm
Think you can fix a gun in the middle of combat that's had it's barrels shorn off and it's inner workings cleaved near in two?

Oh, I get it now. You're talking about a gun that we just slashed.

I thought you were asking me to fix it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 28, 2015, 10:03:01 pm
So you guys know, think of the twins personalities of two labs who haven't been neutered. But with manner's and a knack at engineering.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on July 29, 2015, 11:24:11 am
XD

I have a Labrador/Rottweiler cross, and she's the sweetest thing you'll ever meet.

Also Gaige needs a pet.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 29, 2015, 11:47:18 am
We already have a baby sky squid.........the same rules on that, apply to any other pet. If it messes with Alister or his stuff, it's dinner. He's a non-discrimatory eater.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 29, 2015, 11:36:51 pm
For the non-interest of everyone here, Amelia is 23, and Reagan is 34.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 01, 2015, 02:04:54 pm
And Koali is 16.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 01, 2015, 02:24:01 pm
Alister is 26, and Alison is 25.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 02, 2015, 02:16:31 pm
Gaige turned 30 about a month ago.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 05, 2015, 10:25:10 am
Am I the only one who gets slightly confused in where everyone else's characters are?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 10:32:57 am
Seriously, I thought Gaige was in the cargo bay, but now he is suddenly in the Armory? Wtf?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 05, 2015, 10:33:49 am
I can move.

Also the Armory is really close to the Cargo Bay.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 10:39:17 am
We don't have a map of the ship dude. But please, take the time to specify were your guy is. It makes thing A LOT easier.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 05, 2015, 10:40:37 am
Sorry, sorry.

Also from other people's impressions it was.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 10:41:47 am
There's still a corridor of unknown length. I never got the impression that you could just stick your head and see into the armory from the cargo bay.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 05, 2015, 10:47:33 am
WE NEED A BLUEPRINT! SUMMON THE PHOTOSHOPS!

But it's not that much of an issue, but yeah, noting where a character is will certainly make things a lot easier, especially when we get to combat scenes like I know we will.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 10:50:09 am
Even more so for those of us who have multiple characters. I gotta balance Alister, Alison, Jasper, and the twins. Twins are always together, but still. Then there's Bdr, and Pies, we all use multiples. It just makes things easier, and it takes like 2 seconds.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 05, 2015, 10:52:39 am
Would make sense, arms and armor are cargo.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 10:54:15 am
Dude, its a separate room. Just take two seconds and show where your character is, that's all we are asking.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 05, 2015, 11:08:01 am
I always imagined it situated near the crew quarters. Especially in the case of a boarding action during the night.

Also a reminder from your friendly neighborhood CA, if you ever find the need to argue PM's are a great way to do it!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 11:25:35 am
I thought it was relatively near where the ship's are. Close to the cargo bay, but still departed by at least 50 feet and walls.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 05, 2015, 12:01:59 pm
Who is up to discuss an actual blueprint over a call?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 05, 2015, 12:06:53 pm
Yes, I can do sometime this evening.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 05, 2015, 12:24:17 pm
My current connection is definitely not enough to sustain a call. I may be at the library later today but I don't know, I'll get back to you on that. Though if you do get a solidified layout I may be able to photoshop something up, no guarantee on that either.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 07, 2015, 02:56:38 pm
Yoooooooooo

Carn's Anglean

I'm half Yeshan

What's everyone's character's heritage?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 07, 2015, 03:56:53 pm
Alison is from an old Guild family, and you know about the twins.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 07, 2015, 06:33:11 pm
Ummm, I'll just go with my full cast list...

Alexander Henley - Paritian

Lorena Henley - Paritian/Yeshan

Travis Warren Davidson - Fallow

Reynold Allen Davidson - Fallow

Preston Allers - Firnfeld

Richard Morgan - Firnfeld

Reagan Alexandria Morgan - Firnfeld

Dahlia Norton - Kian

Amelia Lockheart - Prominent Guild Offshoot in Landmark

Phillip Williams - Chaladonian

Notes on Kian: Though Kian is located in Firnfeld it isn't connected to any of the other settlements, because of this I treat it like other cities in The Burren and The Middle Plains. Also noted is that Lore wise Kian is inhabited by Turan refugees so that technically makes Dahlia Turan.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 08, 2015, 12:14:37 pm
The crew is here, you guys can use the three other captains and pilots for your use. As for the crew members, its around a forty person team which you can make new characters or just have them nameless. But they are there if you need some new people.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 08, 2015, 12:29:06 pm
Gaige is from the Guild, left when he was 18.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 08, 2015, 12:34:14 pm
Want my entire list or current in this story lol
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 08, 2015, 01:04:07 pm
DO EVERYONE! NO ONE IS IRRELEVANT!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 08, 2015, 01:12:42 pm
As I thought of Alexi, I was thinking he and Alister may have had an old rivalry. Both competent mercenaries, competing for jobs. Would make for some interesting interactions.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 08, 2015, 10:50:27 pm
DO EVERYONE! NO ONE IS IRRELEVANT!

Ok let's see who I have.

Zhao Family (Yeshan if you didn't know already)

Shen-44 side:

Unnamed mother and father
Shui-brother:42
Mulan(original I know)-sister:39
Chang-Nephew:20
Feng-Nephew:18
Ping-Niece:21

Liu-43 side-

Unnamed mother and father
Luli-twin sister:43
Hao-brother-in-law:40
Mei-niece:21

Intermediate family-
Huan-son:18
Ny-Lee-daughter:21
Azn-son:24

Crew of the Comet and Lightning-
Syá-Commander:21
Lau-Ensign:18
Wèi-Engineer
Pān-Engineer
Pai-Engineer

Imperial Family-
Xi-Emperor(deceased):45
Kayo-wife:40

Imperial Elites-
Chung:2nd Lieutenant:20
Szeto:Colonel:33

(ex-)Senate Heads-
Admiral Fang(deceased)-Tiger
Councilman Fu-Deer

Yeshan Mercenary Guild-
Niko-Friend of the family-25
Gang-Niko's cousin:30

Miscellaneous-
Jinora Qin-Chang-ning anchor
Ting-Manor butler
Jia-Party planner
Ling-Chung-Xi's secretary

Anvala-
Tommy-Anvalan:22
Allen-Sarin:25
John-Anvalan:23
Courage Bell-Fallow:21
Charles Nelson-Anvalan:34
Althea(even though she is Yiski's)-Anvalan:24

Barons-
Bertram Melin-Captain:28
Timothy Frey-Commander:30

Zankief's crew-
Zankief-Boomtown:33
Archer-Vystorg:19
Pavel(deceased)-Selogarod:25

Cathedral-
Xin-Yeshan Councilman:35
Enger-Baron Councilman:43
Alishia-Guild Councilwoman:26
Isamu Zuki:Yeshan gunsmith:56
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 08, 2015, 10:57:17 pm
Boomtown? I'm not sure whether to laugh, or be impressed.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 08, 2015, 11:25:04 pm
Boomtown? I'm not sure whether to laugh, or be impressed.

East of Hole on the Dust Coast. You know I wouldnt make up town or city names.

(http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/gunsoficarusonline/images/2/27/Guns_of_Icarus_Map.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20140314035859)
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 09, 2015, 08:00:52 am
Boomtown? I'm not sure whether to laugh, or be impressed.

East of Hole on the Dust Coast. You know I wouldnt make up town or city names.

(http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/gunsoficarusonline/images/2/27/Guns_of_Icarus_Map.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20140314035859)
..........For some reason, I thought Boomtown was his last name.......also, I could find the town. Don't know which is the Dust coast.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 09, 2015, 08:09:07 am
The Dust Coast is the region just east of The Middle Plains. It also happens to be south of The Chattering Fjords, aka land of the Baronies.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 09, 2015, 08:17:35 am
The Dust Coast is the region just east of The Middle Plains. It also happens to be south of The Chattering Fjords, aka land of the Baronies.
Thank you Pies. Have a salute.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 09, 2015, 08:23:22 am
It helps to have a copy of the map stashed on my computer.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 09, 2015, 08:38:07 am
I have it bookmarked, but I didn't know where the Dust Coast was. Never looked as much in that chunk.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 10, 2015, 07:26:15 am
While not necessarily important, there are no actual tables in the warehouse. There are however a multitude of crates of stuff, piles of stuff, shelves of stuff, but no tables of stuff. Sometimes crates are shuffled about to be sat on or used as tables but no actual tables. To continue on this there are technically 2 buildings here, the warehouse proper where everything's stored, now on side is the office building, which has been heavily remodeled into a home, featuring rooms for the crew as well as an armory, kitchen/dining room, gathering room and the bathrooms, which already existed and were fixed up. While the building has a loading bay it has been converted into the main workshop where most of their larger pieces of equipment are maintained as well as numerous projects that the crew may be working on.

Onto the Skyrunner, while technically a Junker, has seen some very hefty modification in the past, very specifically before it came into the hands of our two resident former Firnfeld Militia Captains Henley and Morgan (Richard). The most notable being the third deck, the increased width and length of the vessel, and numerous other minor things. The second deck contains a cargo hold and a crew berth for extended voyages. While there is no galley the crew cooks meals up on the top deck with a portable stove (Standard Issue Firnfeld Militia equipment that, need to keep warm while on patrol, also cook lunch). The number of weapon emplacements remain the same however the front gun position could feasibly mount a medium weapon if it was modified to a degree.

As of the moment the Skyrunner's armament is:
The front gun mount extends forward away from the ship, where the Rocket Craft Starlight Seeker would be attached beneath it to the vessel.

Thinking on it now the Skyrunner is a class of its own now... Hmm...

Also Bdr, Kei Naga? Seriously?  :P Not like I'm one to talk, considering I kind of see Preston as Hans Grimmish.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 10, 2015, 11:48:02 am
Don't look at me, I mean we did go off using names from that series for the engines in the Rocket Race.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 10, 2015, 11:53:20 am
Just watch, The Birdmen are out there building Excalibur or something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 10, 2015, 09:57:30 pm
Looking back, we sorta had a Stonehedge thing going on in Past, Present, Future thread.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 10, 2015, 10:08:50 pm
Oh dear, any other super weapons I should be aware of?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on August 10, 2015, 10:15:23 pm
Umm Sunderland's flare?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 11, 2015, 11:59:20 am
You know what? Why not.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 24, 2015, 04:01:29 pm
Pies, there needs to be more Andromeda interludes.....
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 26, 2015, 11:27:25 am
Well who knows, maybe we'll see some Andromeda adventures in the future. Andy is an interesting perspective to write from actually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 26, 2015, 11:37:53 am
Andromeda is great

I hope it gets to help out sometime in the future.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 26, 2015, 07:49:29 pm
Soooo... What exactly is it? A Metroid?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 26, 2015, 08:01:31 pm
Koali, our characters only met about 1 day ago, as far as the story goes. Why do you think Koali has Sister's frequency?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 26, 2015, 10:30:13 pm
Sister's frequency? I thought it was yours?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 27, 2015, 07:46:34 am
The heck?! Very weird typo. Still, you don't have the frequency dude.

Also Shaded, would you mind NOT being so abrasive? Popping in to make snarky comments, doesn't actually progress the story. I'm also dealing with a lot of crap irl, and don't need it right now.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 27, 2015, 09:00:27 am
Well, it was an attempt to reinsert myself into the story.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on August 27, 2015, 10:17:41 am
I was trying to do something similar to Koali, actually.

Besides, it's not directed at you, I think the twins are great. 
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 27, 2015, 12:02:02 pm
I think it has been mentioned that Lorena speaks her mind without thinking of the consequences so that is actually rather in character for her.

While this in a way makes her similar to Reagan in that respect there are a number of differences. For instance Reagan is a professional when it comes to her job, enough so she'll be actively thinking and making sure that her temper doesn't get a hold of her. Lorena on the other hand has her father's penchant for well placed insanity, doing things so out there you have to wonder if it was planned. That said Reagan is not a peoples person, only really getting along with a few people while Lorena is a sneaky sneaky snark thing who actively works to having good natured fun and occasionally annoying people deliberately. There are other things but I'll leave it at that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 27, 2015, 02:50:57 pm
Secondary note, there seems to be a disconnect on the nature of this rp for some of us. For instance this is not the RP Tavern and in no way connected to it, the posting nature is far too different, and while snappy one liners and single sentence replies will happen things don't simply happen because we say so.

Silliness can happen only if we can make it consistent and not over the top, Andromeda is an example of this. I mean after all we're going to hunt down a cabal of mad scientists who create mutants is a flying squid much worse?

So no, Koali you don't have his radio frequency, you can certainly get it however. Exalt you're more or less alright, though both of you should post more often I hate feeling like we're leaving you out.

And remember, serious, but playful.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 27, 2015, 04:01:35 pm
I agree with Pieman. I don't WANT you guys left out. But you need to post things that actually progress the story. A few sentences of banter don't do that. And has ANYONE heard of Spades lately?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 27, 2015, 05:08:54 pm
I don't know, Lorena calling the twins idiots doesn't do much either.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 27, 2015, 08:44:19 pm
Right then, is my new post better?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 27, 2015, 08:48:27 pm
Better. Just try and be consistent.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 28, 2015, 03:17:15 am
And remember, Andromeda is the real hero of this story. Everything we do must perpetuate that narrative.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 28, 2015, 07:55:24 am
Obviously. Maybe Andy is a product of the Birdmen? A incomplete one, which we find the resources to finish?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 28, 2015, 08:08:14 am
The actual origin of Andy stems from the old forum's description game, which I was extremely bored in exploring one day many moons ago. (Good times those)

That said however Andy is a bit of a quandary, I'd rather not say Andy is incomplete but not really a developed being. Perhaps maybe a creature akin to the perspicacious loris from the leviathan series of books, or perhaps the Aerozone from Skybreaker/Starclimber.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 28, 2015, 12:33:44 pm
Don't know those. I thought maybe we find a serum, injected Andy, then boom. Amelia riding a sky kraken.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 28, 2015, 01:09:17 pm
To be fair Leviathan features the namesake of the book being a giant flying whale the British Empire uses as an airship, a literal kraken, bats that ingest metal shards and then excrete them upon their enemies at high velocity, The Russian Empire utilizes Bear cavalry, two headed eagles as messenger birds, Austria, Germany, And the Ottoman Empire use mechs and normal zeppelins in combat. It's kind of great actually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on August 28, 2015, 02:14:43 pm
.........PM me details of author, publisher, and all that stuff please.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on August 28, 2015, 04:06:56 pm
No, don't PM. Post it here. We all want to know. :D
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on August 28, 2015, 04:30:21 pm
So unless you've decided to google it in the time since I last posted:

Leviathan is a series of young adult novels (I know, bit of a deal breaker) by Scott Westerfeld taking place in an alternate history during the age of world war 1. The British and their traditional allies of France and Russia have discovered the ability to manipulate biology, calling themselves darwinists after great scientist Charles Darwin they've created all manner of beasties to do... things really. Germany and their allies however decided no, they were not going to manipulate biology and created armored war machines to be piloted into battle.

Moving on from the universe aspects of things, by the very nature of young adult novels this is not a series of war books, as much as that might have been really cool it is a series of adventure novels following young Austrian Prince Aleksander and British airman Dylan Sharp, who happens to be a girl in disguise because spoiler alert this is 1914 and they haven't discovered the fighting ability of woman.

Still the books are enjoyable enough I feel.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 02:43:42 pm
Sooo can someone interact with my guys? Apart from Jasper, and perhaps Alison, they're all in the Hangar Bay, and I don't know what to do.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 01, 2015, 05:00:54 pm
I don't know, have them begin talking about things and we'll begin...

PULLING

EVERYONE

INTO IT.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 05:26:05 pm
Unfortunately Alister is talking with Alexi, which requires Bdr. Alison I'm not sure yet. Maybe rigs a more serious determent in front of Jasper's cell. As for him, well he's under threat of extreme pain if he opens his mouth. And I don't know what to do with the comedic relief aka the twins. If anyone has a banana, specifically the peal, THEN I have a idea.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 01, 2015, 08:12:26 pm
A banana? I happen to be collecting fruits. How about, say, 20 bananas?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 09:31:04 pm
Excellent. Now they just need a duck, and a young woman willing to be embarrassed and not kill them.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 01, 2015, 09:46:29 pm
Hey I did say Alexi, Reynard, and Ulric were free to use by you guys
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 09:57:00 pm
.......I COMPLETELY forgot about that.......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 01, 2015, 09:59:55 pm
I put them in so if I'm not here the day can go with you guys using them, which should end soon. So far I at least put some perspective on how they should act. Also the thre other pilots, since we aren't out yet, I'll take control of them for e moment.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 10:07:17 pm
Besides nervousness, I'm not sure about Reynard. Alexi I understand, and Ulric will make for interesting dialogue with any and all hotheads.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 01, 2015, 10:09:23 pm
Koali, I wouldn't count on getting the bone. Marrow is a good source of protein.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 01, 2015, 10:52:52 pm
Bone meal is a good crafting material if used correctly.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 02, 2015, 07:47:19 am
True, but my understanding is that he needed a intact bone. Also, what kind of market just gives away that much food?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 02, 2015, 09:43:43 am
Steampunk Costco, I guess.

The marrow is off-limits, Carn.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 02, 2015, 09:50:19 am
Hungry Carn says differently. Anyways, the Hangar Bay is PART of the ship Koali. It's not a separate building. It's just a REALLY big room with ships, planes, tanks, and a rocket craft..........the ship is freaking huge OK?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 02, 2015, 12:18:41 pm
So huge he mistook it for a separate building. That and there is a door into the ship and towards the armory.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 02, 2015, 03:51:40 pm
Let's just say I have a terrible sense of direction.

Also... Hungry Carn does NOT get the bone. I have plans for it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 02, 2015, 04:05:53 pm
Hungry Carn has a axe. He is also your commanding officer.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 02, 2015, 04:09:27 pm
Look at us, fighting over a bone like dogs fighting over a...

*cough*

A bone.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 02, 2015, 05:53:52 pm
Technically you signed up yesterday, this is day two of things.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 02, 2015, 06:03:23 pm
Well then. I guess that this particular iteration of my character is a bit of an airhead, but can fix things like nobody's business.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 02, 2015, 08:49:21 pm
What do you mean "this particular" iteration?  :P
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 03, 2015, 01:27:36 pm
 8)
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 03, 2015, 03:39:31 pm
Come on man, the Tavern iteration inflates himself. How is that not being a airhead?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 03, 2015, 07:30:10 pm
No, it was funnier in the normal sense.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 04, 2015, 08:36:55 pm
Koali, I must insist that your character either call me Mister Carn, or Alister. In fact, that goes for everybody. Not just Carn, and never Al.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 04, 2015, 10:57:53 pm
You're going to have to insist to Reagan's face because she doesn't know that, at all, and already mentally calls him Al, which'll probably still happen.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 05, 2015, 01:13:21 am
Ah, but Koali has little to no experience with authority! Make it a silly scene!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 05, 2015, 03:31:37 pm
As long as she doesn't call him that out loud, and I'm sure I said that already. Koali, he will go drill sergeant on you. Or reassign you.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 05, 2015, 08:23:17 pm
Well, Koali is just a fresh recruit. He needs discipline!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 05, 2015, 08:35:26 pm
We're also not members of the militia, we're a bunch of mercs who have been hired to do shit. We're also being paid. A lot actually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 05, 2015, 09:43:28 pm
Which is why I'm okay with Alister, and not making everyone aside from Reagan and Frey call him "Sir.' And Koali, if Alister is doing discipline........ask the twins why they don't like the harnesses, and while your at it, talk about Alison's cooking.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 05, 2015, 09:46:01 pm
If we're lucky Amelia will get so annoyed at everyone she once again displays simple yet fantastic cooking.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 06, 2015, 11:13:50 am
Alison's cooking has been used as punishment before. Combined with the harnesses......its rather effective. Alister is at least an adequate cook.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 11, 2015, 07:15:25 pm
So, sorry about my infrequent postings, been rather distracted of late. Still when we get the ball rolling on the quest my postings should be more or less back to normal.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 12, 2015, 10:24:11 pm
I may be unable to post frequently because I'm suffering from a disease commonly known as "Calculus Homework"
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 12, 2015, 10:43:06 pm
Wait, what kind of calculus?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 13, 2015, 12:05:04 am
AP Calculus BC

If that means anything to you...

AP for advanced placement, BC to indicate it is an accelerated version of AB, covering 2 semesters' worth of material instead of 1.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 13, 2015, 12:11:37 am
I took the AB class actually, absolutely horrible at it mind you but I did it anyway. The BC class was unofficial but was taught during my AP Physics class by the same teacher. Freaking genius kids... Our graduating class had two valedictorians and a salutatorian, it was an odd year.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 13, 2015, 12:19:00 am
Ah calculus, I believe cal 3 was my highest. And pie who are the four again
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 13, 2015, 12:20:42 am
Reagan
Amelia
Lorena
Davis Hargrave - Academic Mercenary Extraordinaire
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 13, 2015, 08:49:41 pm
The day is technically over, just need to finish up with Couage, but the trip will start soon
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 13, 2015, 10:28:58 pm
I would like to do more, but shaded seems to be only posting once a week. It ties me up.......I don't want to have to make some BS reason to stop the conversation........
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 13, 2015, 10:41:16 pm
Insert conversation montage here.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 13, 2015, 10:43:09 pm
Hey, come outside and see the food! Food is a great excuse to end a conversation!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 14, 2015, 12:16:07 pm
Koali, you are yelling at a closed, armored, gigantic airship. Alister can't hear you.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 15, 2015, 06:26:50 pm
I'm just, uh...

I'm just staying in character!

Totally!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 15, 2015, 06:46:23 pm
Also, Benny? Really? Does Alister have to install corporal punishment?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 15, 2015, 09:52:32 pm
I like to consider this iteration of Koali to be an idiot savant, in that while he's not exactly the brightest of people, if you can get him to do what he does best, he'll excel at it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on September 16, 2015, 04:37:03 pm
Really, medium rare?

I would've expected blue rare and aged.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 16, 2015, 04:48:26 pm
Hey, its a Inn, not a five star.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on September 16, 2015, 04:51:40 pm
Yeah but blue rare is easy enough to pull off
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 20, 2015, 02:29:24 pm
Blue rare? But why?

That's only slightly past raw!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on September 23, 2015, 09:27:26 pm
Blue rare? But why?

That's only slightly past raw!

He's a special forces Anglean.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 23, 2015, 10:50:54 pm
I actually refer to my stomach as a cast iron cauldron. But can we get more posts please?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 23, 2015, 11:09:20 pm
I'm working on something, apologies for my general inactivity.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 24, 2015, 12:15:16 am
Blue rare? But why?

That's only slightly past raw!

He's a special forces Anglean.

Yeah, but it's nice to eat something warm once in a while...

I actually refer to my stomach as a cast iron cauldron. But can we get more posts please?

1) So does that mean you can cook food after you swallow it?

2) I'd love to post, but I'm lost in the streets of Cathedral.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 24, 2015, 12:18:54 am
It's day 3.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 07:57:25 am
Koali, it's more like a witch's cauldron. Straight from the depths of hell.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 24, 2015, 08:00:27 am
Demon's Brew is strong stuff after all.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 08:05:16 am
Hmmm I like that description Pieman......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 24, 2015, 08:06:52 am
It aptly describes a lot of thing. Alcohol burns and so does stomach acid, albeit in a different way.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 08:46:11 am
True. I call it that as a regularly eat cartilage,  and......questionable foods.........


Please, send steak.......the cafeteria here has no idea what they are doing...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 24, 2015, 09:08:27 am
It's day 3.

I know, I stayed lost overnight.

True. I call it that as a regularly eat cartilage,  and......questionable foods.........


Please, send steak.......the cafeteria here has no idea what they are doing...

BUT THERE'S QUICHE

Also, could one of y'all open the door? I have fruit and meat.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 09:52:57 am
Koali, it's not locked. Also, I may have Alister put you on a leash. With a bell.


AND THEY DO NOT SERVE QUICHE. One time it was pink chicken with some feathers still on it. I still ate it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 24, 2015, 03:57:37 pm
Ah, I guess you have to make the quiche on your own.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 06:39:04 pm
Apples and turkey are just fine.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on September 24, 2015, 06:56:18 pm
Orange is best breakfast fruit.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 07:47:47 pm
Shaded, Frey already left the galley.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 24, 2015, 08:08:18 pm
Sound travels differently in a packed galley. It's the concentration of food.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 24, 2015, 08:11:32 pm
Hmm. Interesting theory.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 24, 2015, 08:39:49 pm
Shaded, Frey already left the galley.

He was not even in the gally the first place, and he only told one person where he was going.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 25, 2015, 06:25:22 pm
I think the best bit is that you called Amelia captain.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 25, 2015, 08:26:29 pm
Yeah that was a deep moment. Was suppose to be Reagan but I was reading Amelia.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 25, 2015, 09:05:23 pm
Amelia is best Captain.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 28, 2015, 06:34:19 pm
Could someone tell me what door leads to the hangar bay? I'm stuck outside pondering existence.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 28, 2015, 09:41:07 pm
Uhhh, the side hatch I think. Then navigate to it........I think this version of you needs a bell.....like a cat's...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 28, 2015, 11:37:59 pm
I'm pretty sure there's two entrances, one on either side that lead straight in for ease of bringing on equipment and the like.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 29, 2015, 07:37:29 am
Yeah, but those things are big enough to pilot a galleon through. I don't think they were left open overnight.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on September 29, 2015, 11:14:03 am
I passed by the command centre on my way to the Galley, and overheard.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 29, 2015, 12:52:39 pm
I passed by the command centre on my way to the Galley, and overheard.
I can buy that. Bdr, you wanna control Jasper for the interrogation? I think you get his personality by now.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 29, 2015, 04:25:58 pm
Uhhh, the side hatch I think. Then navigate to it........I think this version of you needs a bell.....like a cat's...

Dunno about a bell, but how about a steam whistle?

Also, thank you for the directions. I'm gonna try to slide open the giant hangar doors, or, failing that, add an unsanctioned doggy-door modification.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 29, 2015, 06:09:45 pm
Or, I just sick a anoyed Alison on you. She's been rather.....inactive..
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 29, 2015, 06:46:40 pm
Koali's character is a certain kind of special.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 29, 2015, 08:29:01 pm
Does that mean I get a sticker?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 29, 2015, 08:38:07 pm
Does that mean I get a sticker?

No, just not a face full of hawacha rockets. So three ways in, two side doors and a front gangplank. So 8 medium turrets, with four on either side running from fore to aft. Mainly for antiship and planes, the middle two are heavy Flaks and the outer two are hawachas.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 29, 2015, 09:13:04 pm
Didn't know how much I need that in my life.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 29, 2015, 09:49:30 pm
Didn't know how much I need that in my life.

So does that mean I get a sticker?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 29, 2015, 09:58:01 pm
Ok basic ship load out

Two huge hanger bay doors to both port and starboard side of the ship, hanger spaces can only fit who ships at a time as well as the launch and retrieval mechanisms for the planes, this is also the lower deck of the transport

Front is a gangplank that can be lowered, there is the front cargo hold where the tank and truck are

Mid deck is the gunnery deck where the 8 main turrets lie, surrounding the ship are also various light weapons mounts

Top deck is the general living quaters ad accommodations are, command center/ bridge is near the front while medical and the brig are towards the rear.

Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 29, 2015, 10:03:09 pm
HOLY CRAP

IS IT REALLY SO MUCH TO ASK FOR

JUST GIMME A !@#$% STICKER

ARBLARBLARBAAAAAARGL

*rages for about 2 hours*

Also, we have a tank?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on September 29, 2015, 10:15:09 pm
And a truck.

Note: I've been treating the truck as a halftrack this entire time...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on September 29, 2015, 10:25:16 pm
Well, "tank and truck," so...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 29, 2015, 10:30:26 pm
Bdr, you got Jasper down quite well. I only request that I do the Hangar story when the time comes. Beyond that, you can use him.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on September 30, 2015, 06:46:37 am
And a truck.

Note: I've been treating the truck as a halftrack this entire time...

It is a half track, two wheels in the front and tracks for he rear, it was a quick post.

And yeah I knew you had some backstory with you two, I just had to mentioned it to peak Frey's interest. 
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on September 30, 2015, 10:30:12 am
Oh definitely. I want to run an idea with you in PM actually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on October 02, 2015, 09:02:31 am
I'll be needing that saw back at some point, but you can keep it for now.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on October 02, 2015, 09:15:14 am
Davis is likely to forget about it for sometime, he's like that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on October 02, 2015, 09:16:52 am
That's fine, it's just that saws are expensive, especially nice ones like that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on October 02, 2015, 10:30:29 am
Alister is serious. He will fire you out a flak cannon if you do that.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on October 02, 2015, 04:31:31 pm
I'm fully aware of that, but I'm stuck in the current character path.

Protip: Koali can be easily distracted when he's not being completely serious.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on October 05, 2015, 10:38:34 am
Aaaaand there you go Bdr, no arming mechanism.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on October 14, 2015, 02:58:57 pm
Food, the calling card of destruction.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on October 26, 2015, 06:50:42 pm
Right, time to get posty. Need to get a handle on the personalities of our resident pilots who happen to not be named Davis Hargrave.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on October 31, 2015, 06:20:52 pm
Yes, I've referenced my grenade barrel from the Tavern thread.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on November 01, 2015, 01:18:44 am
If I recall correctly, that was more powerful than one of my powder kegs.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on November 01, 2015, 07:30:36 am
Yeah.......there was a lot of loch, thermite, and tar grenades in it.....plus the experimentals.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on November 07, 2015, 10:18:07 pm
Koali PLEASE think about what you're posting in the actual story thread.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on November 08, 2015, 03:00:27 pm
Yeah, that last post was a little ridiculous.

Just claim that you have something last minute to take care of and leave, and you can later claim (If we leave before you can post) you got on the ship before we left.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on November 09, 2015, 05:05:23 pm
Apologies, I was mainly trying to say that I was being knocked out by schoolwork again.

I think I'll just stow away in a barrel for now.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 04, 2016, 03:55:59 pm
Right. It's been a long time since the last post. Can I go around drawing moustaches on everyone or should I wait a little longer?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 04, 2016, 07:31:23 pm
Good question, been distracted for a bit and I start college tomorrow as well... so it might be a bit till I can get a post in. What say the rest of us?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 05, 2016, 12:37:53 pm
I would love to continue, and should be able to get at least one post in a day, more likely more. I just don't know what to do.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 06, 2016, 12:11:02 am
Soooo... Is that a yes on the moustaches, or...?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 06, 2016, 02:15:49 am
It depends, I'll most definitely try to get a post in once classes are done tomorrow however.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Hypnopotamus Rex on January 06, 2016, 08:19:47 am
I'm tempted to write a story in the Cantina that's posted on a chapter-by-chapter basis. Is there a decent thread explaining the background of factions/cities/etc I can use for background?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 06, 2016, 11:09:16 am
I'd recommend reading through:

1.) The World section of the forum. While things there may not be entirely correct there are some things that could certainly give you ideas.
2.) The World section of the home page. There you'll find the overviews as written by muse.

Using these two together should get you on the right track.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 06, 2016, 03:42:11 pm
Yeah, sadly there's not a lot of concrete lore released. Definitely do what Pies said, but there are a few lore friendly RP threads. Burning Skies and Skies have No Limit are pretty lore friendly, at least in how many people perceive the world and its possibilities. You'll have to filter through pure player written stuff, but those are rather obvious.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Hypnopotamus Rex on January 06, 2016, 04:34:28 pm
Thanks, guys. I was expecting something more limiting, but a chance for a little creative liberty should make writing pretty fun.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 07, 2016, 09:47:05 am
No problem. Also Koali, please keep the fourth wall intact, at least in Uncharted Skies.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 07, 2016, 11:53:12 am
Post is a bit late but it's there, now I must run, college awaits.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 09, 2016, 06:32:37 pm
Been so long. Gonna make a new post and advancing the timeline a little bit. Don't know how often I can post, so I'm leaving it to both of you Carn and Pie
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 09, 2016, 06:39:32 pm
Lets see if we can build up a bit more momentum.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 11, 2016, 04:40:19 am
Ok so:

1.) Post has gone out, keep up the momentum on this.

2.) We're 48 pages in and we're finally getting started. We're goddamn Berserk, except we're getting on a boat instead of getting off of one.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 20, 2016, 11:12:30 pm
The gunnery deck is open to the elements like the lower deck of a Galleon, right?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 21, 2016, 01:32:03 am
I feel there would be something like an aircraft carrier's island located at the center and a bit to the rear to hold both the stairs and ladders to the other decks, as well as ammunition and maintenance supplies.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 21, 2016, 11:06:26 am
Well anyways, post coming later today, expect it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 21, 2016, 08:54:26 pm
If you do look back a few pages, the Gunnery Deck has bay doors that open and extends the guns out. So when not in use they are protected from the elements.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 22, 2016, 06:19:35 am
Ok so I lied, college stuff takes precedence, will get to posting eventually.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 24, 2016, 04:29:25 pm
Some little fun now.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 24, 2016, 04:53:26 pm
Devious.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 24, 2016, 05:25:40 pm
Well at least it'll be interesting. Night fight with this matchup. Who is at the gun deck out of curiosity?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 24, 2016, 05:40:18 pm
koali, gaige, i believe lorena? and a bunch of random crew
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 24, 2016, 06:20:56 pm
Amelia, Lorena was with Alison in their now shared room.

Also post incoming, had to eat lunch.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 24, 2016, 09:50:15 pm
Soooo I may have forgotten the twin's first names and Alison's last name.......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 25, 2016, 02:31:40 pm
I know I should just read, but can I get a tl;dr of the battle? As in, who's fighting, where, and am I involved?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 25, 2016, 02:58:53 pm
You are on the gunnery deck, along with Shaded/Gaige, and Amelia. Reagan is at the helm along with Frey. Alison is at the medbay, and Jasper is in the brig. Alister is piloting his Squid with the twins and a random NPC for crew, currently duking it out with the enemy Squid.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 25, 2016, 06:15:45 pm
I have the Twins down as John and James, couldn't find a last name for Alison though.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 25, 2016, 06:31:18 pm
I have the Twins down as John and James, couldn't find a last name for Alison though.

Same
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 25, 2016, 07:17:09 pm
Thank you
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 25, 2016, 08:32:02 pm
I'm so glad I equipped the Kibeth for bombing.....
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 25, 2016, 11:28:36 pm
BAM! I actually took time writing something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 26, 2016, 07:39:33 am
Huzzah! I approve!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 26, 2016, 01:12:58 pm
Woo!

Also, I haven't fired yet because I'd rather avoid collateral damage.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 26, 2016, 01:58:28 pm
I've given you the narrative point to fire, which the entire battery has at my point in the story. But doesn't mean you have fired already. Give em hell why don't you?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 26, 2016, 06:42:59 pm
The twins do not have fond memories of the harnesses.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 26, 2016, 07:05:52 pm
Is it OK for me to be a ridiculously good gunner, or, at the very least, extremely lucky?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 26, 2016, 07:27:53 pm
Koali, the weather deck, where Alister is, ABOVE the gunnery deck, where you are. Directly above you. You can't aim it that high.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on January 26, 2016, 07:58:42 pm
Plus, you have to shoot through the floo and behind you. The gun platform extends out
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 26, 2016, 08:30:40 pm
The guns don't really rotate that much
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 26, 2016, 11:19:25 pm
I could've sworn you were off fighting aboard a Squid somewhere.

Evidently, you aren't. Lemme go point the flak cannon at someone else.

EDIT: Right, there's a new post, the raider's alive, and I just missed a raider truck by a mile.

Now, this operates on the assumption that the caravan is within my arcs. Is that assumption correct?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 27, 2016, 12:48:29 am
Yes, that is correct.

Also what happened with the squid was that it crashed into the weather deck after a flyby consisting of Antonio and Farris who I'm enjoying writing a bit.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 27, 2016, 09:56:52 am
I was under the impression it was destroyed. And Koali, this is why you read the other posts. Alister WAS on the Squid, then he boarded the main ship to attack the raiders who ALREADY boarded it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 27, 2016, 01:12:22 pm
The first squid was destroyed and its crew bailed out over the shadow. The second squid disengaged and parked over the transport before being destroyed by the scout wing.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 27, 2016, 05:48:39 pm
Well, the problem has been rectified, we just need someone with powers to delete the post.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on January 28, 2016, 05:21:41 pm
Gaige apparently likes exercising his twitchy trigger finger enough to trust that Amelia can deal with that idiot crew all on her lonesome.

Not that she's incompetent, just that's it's a lot of stupidity to handle alone for anyone.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 28, 2016, 06:08:00 pm
I think she's raised their fear of her, higher than their stupidity.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on January 28, 2016, 07:17:18 pm
As Gaige wisely said; "Sometimes subtlety with the threat of much violence later on is a very effective method."
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on January 28, 2016, 08:08:12 pm
Here we go, in light of my screw-up:

(http://i.imgur.com/6HmbLRol.jpg)
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on February 11, 2016, 05:35:58 am
Thought I'd compile our current list of mentioned minor characters, those with and without names, which is few mind you, but it'd be good to remember who's who.

Named Minor Crew:
Mr. Charles Banning - Comm Officer (Unknown Shift)
Belle - Comm Officer (Unknown Shift)

Mentioned Unnamed Minor Crew:
Head Engineer (Male, Bushy Beard, Random Shifts)
4 Man Maintenance Crew (The Flak of Doom)
-Team Leader (Male)
-Crew Member (Male)
-Crew Member (Female)
-Crew Member (Male)
Helmsman (Male, Unknown Shift)
Birdman Infiltrator (Undiscovered, Male, Probably A Huge Asshole)

While a minor point I was also thinking we could set up a duty roster, after all we have a lot of crew and while we won't get to know everyone it'll at least allow the minor characters to be seen doing other things, I propose we use this system https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Watch_system#Swedish_system but that's up for discussion. If we do decide this (Might be a bit complicated) I'd like a concrete crew count so I can simply fill in no names to populate the roster.

As for the scout wing we have the typical combat division of:

A Flight:
Davis
Kei

B Flight:
Antonio
Farris
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on February 11, 2016, 04:50:28 pm
Ahh duty sections. My Navy life has joined with my personal life. But having a spread sheet can help. When are you guys available for a call.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on February 11, 2016, 05:42:24 pm
Saturday and Sunday, also friday anytime after 2:30 PM PST
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on February 12, 2016, 09:57:03 am
Probably should do this in a pm guys.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on February 12, 2016, 07:58:43 pm
I'll get a post up in a few hours.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on February 16, 2016, 07:47:37 pm
If there is nothing else, I'm going to advance it a few hours.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on February 17, 2016, 07:43:05 am
I've got nothing, advance it, my next post will be where they zip off to.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on February 17, 2016, 05:08:16 pm
Go nuts I've had my fun.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 01:32:27 pm
Well, huh, that's interesting.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 01:35:12 pm
Just crash landed on my way to the baronies, it's just a "PURE COINCIDENCE" that Commander Frey is a Barony officer of the intelligence division and I'm on his planned movement trajectory...

JUST A COINCIDENCE!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 01:51:02 pm
Well whatever the case welcome aboard! Also I need to finally get a post in, Our Lady of Engineering Lorena needs to make her grand appearance.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 02:36:22 pm
People looking now in the "recent posts" section will be extremely pissed off.
But, still, finally I was able to finish and post THIS part of my char background.
THERE IS STILL MORE TO COME
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 02:43:54 pm
Also slight disconnect, the expedition is taking a route Southeast of Cathedral, taking the route from Cathedral to Sunder to Truth Lake and White Sea before crossing into The Guild from Albys over the Abyssal Gulf. From there we'll proceed from Starostrog to Vyshtorg and then begin our expedition in Gura Lupulul. Orrington as you've noted lay to the Southwest of Cathedral and is out of our general path. We can fix this though, somehow.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 02:51:15 pm
Oh god, my bad
Having only a low res map bounds you to make such mistakes
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 02:53:57 pm
WE CAN FIX THIS, DON'T WORRY!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 02:56:26 pm
I could fix it by saying that actually Mr. Emil doesn't know shit about maps, so he confused two lakes and his real position.




That'd also explain his official codename in the Barony: Strayed
"Go there they said, I tried! But I got lost, I don't know where am I.
I staryed from the planned path, but the place is nice!"
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 03:06:14 pm
I find that quite amusing actually, go for it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 03:09:41 pm
But would it be ok if I did?
I mean, I don't wanna appear to be a person with strong protagonism, so would it really be ok if I posted there twice in a row?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 06, 2016, 03:14:52 pm
you can modify it if there is time still
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 03:17:44 pm
I can't modify it any longer!
*Darth Vader voice*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 06, 2016, 03:20:03 pm
I can't modify it any longer!
*Darth Vader voice*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

http://nooooooooooooooo.com/

You might need this.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 06, 2016, 03:23:21 pm
Thank you based Pieman
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 07, 2016, 10:09:40 am
Welcome aboard, who picks him up?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 07, 2016, 01:55:28 pm
We could have our escorts do it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 07, 2016, 02:30:36 pm
Planning to.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 07, 2016, 06:39:54 pm
My characters will remain silent until they reach Frey's office on the Shadow
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 08, 2016, 06:27:03 am
When writing, do you people plan in advance, or do you improvise?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 08, 2016, 07:32:36 am
A bit of column a, a bit of column b.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on March 10, 2016, 02:01:11 am
Can someone stuff me in a barrel for the time being?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 10, 2016, 03:35:58 am
Aren't you already in a barrel?

Also:

When writing, do you people plan in advance, or do you improvise?

Generally if your scenes don't involve characters that are most definitely the mains of the other participants you have free reign to do whatever really. And even if they do you can improvise so long as you don't kill them off. With larger and more important narrative events... there's really not much of a structure to those either, if you take a look at our battle scene a few pages back you'll get what I'm talking about. We sort of just posted at random, playing off of the evolving structure of things as posts continued.

To further explain:

We have the framing situation and the main central elements. As we post we extrapolate and build upon those elements to build up the narrative. Occasionally we add additional elements and introduce events to further this. So long as the events aren't too out of left field, or fit despite being batshit insane we can work with them. This is the main bit to this, you can add anything to the story so long as you can make it work, or it isn't important enough to explain further, I mean, I introduced Andromeda after all... I need to do more with that character.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 10, 2016, 04:05:00 am
Fair enough
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 10, 2016, 04:39:25 am
Generally if you have questions about an idea ask Bdr and he can help you out.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on March 12, 2016, 05:47:14 pm
Unarmed fighting Gaige would be interested in.  He's decent at it, but nothing to write home about.  Getting tips from Carn would be something he'd appreciate.  Marksmanship contests he'd probably skip out on for fear of pissing the crew off.  He is an excellent shot.  While he usually carries around his pair of pistols, Judgement and Jury, (Judgement is for big stuff or long range, Jury is for general use.  Also, Judgement is now retconned from a .454 Casull to a .500 S&W.)  he is well acquainted with rifles of all kinds.  Teaching the swabbies is also something he'd be raring to go at.

Once that's out of the way, I could concievably see him hosting a tinkering workshop.

As in, teach people things workshop.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 12, 2016, 05:52:48 pm
If Gaige manages to win everyone in unarmed fighting, an entire song could be written about it for the bards and singers of the future generations.
It would be called.

"The engineer who beat the everliving crap out of everyone"
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 12, 2016, 06:22:11 pm
Crow, Alister does wear armor, though it is under his outer clothing. It's tungsten plated kevlar.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on March 12, 2016, 10:39:47 pm
I seriously doubt that Gaige could beat Carn anything more than a potential 1/10 ratio.  He's good, but not Anglean special forces supersoldier reknowned even among his other supersoldier special forces members for being really good at melee/hand to hand GOOD.

Also, his ubiquitous jacket has what is basically akin to Ballistic Weave from Fallout 4, (not overkill) along with being made from incredibly heat and fire resistant materials.

Wouldn't do to have your nice, white jacket get burnt on a boiler.

That said it's not as good as hard armor, but it'll stop most small arms well enough.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 13, 2016, 02:30:44 pm
What do the anvalan planes look like?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 13, 2016, 04:20:48 pm
Not entirely sure, think mid WWII planes, I'm leaning towards Britain.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 13, 2016, 05:02:21 pm
If it's a British plane, it should be a Sea Hurricane mk II.
Also planes like the Russian Yak could be more fitting.
The American P-400 could also be nice.
But since I have a thing for German planes I would opt for the Bf 109 E-4.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 13, 2016, 05:06:39 pm
I believe Bdr said something about a Full Wing Design. Hope that narrows things down.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 13, 2016, 05:17:21 pm
For "full wing" you mean something like the B-2 "Spirit" ?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on March 13, 2016, 05:44:43 pm
Flying Wings are pretty sweet.  I don't think they'd be so good for fighters though...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 13, 2016, 05:53:43 pm
The Germans actually made some prototype of a full wing jet fighter.
It was partly a success.
Partly a disastrous failure.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 13, 2016, 06:15:47 pm
Crap, typo. Gull wing, not Full wing, my bad.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 13, 2016, 06:47:56 pm
Gull wing... Like the F4U Corsair?
OHMYGODILOVETHATPLANE
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 14, 2016, 12:05:05 am
Gull wing... Like the F4U Corsair?
OHMYGODILOVETHATPLANE


Hit the nail on the head.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 14, 2016, 03:00:28 am
Does the anvalan model have only machine guns or only the cannons? Both even?
The machine guns are the 12.7 or the 7.62 mm ones?
Are airplane-borne rockets even existing in the GoIO universe?

Are even all these kind of armaments legit in the GoIO universe at all?

This plane is truly lovable.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 14, 2016, 03:06:33 am
If I recall the standard armament for our specific craft is 8 rockets, 2 cannons and 2 machine guns. That came about from:

Kei continues, "Single prop, looks like a modified squid engine was used. Rocket racks under the wings, and two guns in either wing."

"For a wired design, those Anvalans sure know how to make a plane," adds Antonio.

It was never specified as to what kind of guns and I've made it so our rockets have magnetic warheads for nominal tracking ability, not great in a dogfight but useful against larger craft.

Also I have a post in the pipeline, should be done in a little bit.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 14, 2016, 08:31:47 am
Since it can hold rockets, using modified Artemis rockets, they can be switched out with bombs.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on March 14, 2016, 04:14:57 pm
I want Mosquitoes.

Corsairs are amazing, but Mosquitoes.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 16, 2016, 04:32:43 pm
Everything begins with s.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 18, 2016, 07:17:01 pm
Sorry for no recent posts, been really busy with work. Hopefully I get one out soon.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 18, 2016, 07:23:01 pm
I should probably get one or two in as well.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on March 18, 2016, 08:55:14 pm
I've got a draft for my next going on in my head.  Should toss one out soon.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 23, 2016, 02:02:43 am
So I thought I would once again compile a list of characters that are technically controllable by anyone (Though I guess certain characters such as Kei and the Scout Pilots and a few others kind of get controlled by a limited set of people because… no one else has decided to do so?) and list them here.

Named Major Crew:
Ulric Culvin – Scientist, Escort Captain
Alexi Kasparov – Mercenary, Escort Captain
Reynard Larson – Merchant Mercenary, Escort Captain
Antonio Wylan – Scout Pilot
Farris Moore – Scout Pilot
Kei Naga – Scout Pilot

Named Crew:
Mr. Charles Banning – Comm Officer (3rd Watch)
Mr. Gregory Allen – Comm Officer (2nd Watch)
Ms. Janet Belle – Comm Officer (1st Watch)
Mr. Martin Yates – Navigator (2nd Watch)
James Crowe – Head Engineer
Hank Friedan – Engineer (2nd Watch)
Marie Wilson – Hanger Tech (2nd Watch)
Theodore Cutler – Marine Gunner (2nd Watch)
Otto Smith – Engineer (Probably a Huge Asshole, Birdman Infiltrator - Undiscovered, 2nd Watch)
Marcus Graham – Engineer (1st Watch)

Mentioned Unnamed Minor Crew:
4 Man Maintenance Crew (The Flak of Doom, 3rd Watch)
-Team Leader (Male)
-Crew Member (Male)
-Crew Member (Female)
-Crew Member (Male)
Helmsman (Male, 3rd Watch)
Helmsman (Male, 1st Watch)
Navigator (Female, 1st Watch)

As a reminder this the watch system I've based our ship off of. It's only really an outline, all crew members are on duty during the day, the watches only designate the absolute minimum number of personnel who should be on duty at any given time. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Watch_system#Swedish_system
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 23, 2016, 05:46:23 am
Uuuuuuuuuh

So Gaige is offering from the Engineering section to go and lend a hand with the recovery operations?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 23, 2016, 05:52:57 am
Gaige is offering to assist around engineering. I doubt he's even aware there's a salvage op going on (In character of course, I'm certain Shaded is capable of knowing current events).
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 23, 2016, 08:00:20 am
Wait pie, Antonio last name is Gonzalez
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 23, 2016, 08:01:19 am
That was never recorded anywhere but I've fixed it in the master document and will be uploaded once we have introduced more crew members.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 23, 2016, 08:03:18 am
It was in the initial introduction. Also when the wreck was spotted I named the navigator Martin
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 23, 2016, 08:05:18 am
Was it? I must've missed that cause I did a search in the thread and couldn't find anything. Also I quite like Martin Yates for some reason, I don't know why.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 23, 2016, 08:07:48 am
Yeah the search only did a few post back. But you can find it when I place where they were originally from
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 23, 2016, 08:14:24 am
Man there are a lot of pages to sift through but I finally found it. If there's one thing I can appreciate it's that we've done a lot more in a similar span of time in comparison to The Skies Have No Limit, if there's one thing to be annoyed about that, it's that fact checking takes a while.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: ShadedExalt on March 26, 2016, 02:17:14 pm
Yes, I am aware of the salvage op, but Gaige himself woke up and made a beeline for engineering.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 30, 2016, 07:26:19 am
May time skip forward if no one has anything.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on March 30, 2016, 08:55:50 am
I might have a thing: Selenia may remember that the Brig has a restricted access, she may enquire about it.
Is it ok? Should I wait 'till the guys in the Brig move on with thier evil plan?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on March 30, 2016, 09:17:35 am
Up to you. We write as we go on.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 30, 2016, 09:38:31 am
Got an idea for a post, will get back to you if it doesn't pan out the way I want it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on March 30, 2016, 09:04:02 pm
Right, post up, go at it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 02, 2016, 07:27:07 am
Well we're now down to 45 crew members Bdr, I hope you know that I want to recruit people once we reach Vyshtorg.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 02, 2016, 08:08:50 am
Lol, can't have everyone live right?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 02, 2016, 02:14:17 pm
Well you can't kill everyone yet we haven't even gotten started! Besides we still need a crew to staff the damn ship. Also that rifle in Davis' plane might finally get some use, also all escort craft on board are currently hobbled the way Fifth Season is so someone is bound to notice them trying prep them for flight.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 02, 2016, 02:50:18 pm
Pie remember how I said there are three ways for airships to get in, port, starboard, and from below. Hello emergency drop
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 02, 2016, 03:05:00 pm
This discussion between you two sounds like a mastermind duel.
Who's gonna write next about thier escape attempt?

Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 03, 2016, 12:37:40 pm
Oh looks like I made a very big mistake. Looking back in the Skies have no Limit, Frey has Army officer titles. Sooo the entire Uncharted Skies I gave him Navy titles. Whoops. His original title is actually Captain and not a Commander which is two ranks higher
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 03, 2016, 12:46:41 pm
Did anyone ever thought of giving the Shadow an illustration? What shape does it has?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 03, 2016, 04:12:24 pm
I'd say something along the lines of this:

(http://pre04.deviantart.net/3b0e/th/pre/f/2013/236/a/2/crusade_battleship_by_progv-d6jh55z.jpg)

But with a balloon and a more visible top deck. Those guns up top would be replaced with our current loadout and be shifted down to a deck below. I'm also unsure as to the scale of the vessel so I think is should be a bit larger than depicted going from the weapons seen.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 03, 2016, 04:27:57 pm
I would also say that instead of a massive balloon hanging over, it has two long balloons lined underneath the top engines extending the entire length of the ship.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 03, 2016, 08:03:39 pm
Would you say that they're also armored in a way similar to the squid's hull? I could see that working.

Also post coming down the pipeline.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 03, 2016, 08:47:59 pm
With a ship this big, some light armor would help a bit around that area.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 05, 2016, 10:08:21 pm
Soooo... Anyone got anything?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 06, 2016, 02:25:10 am
I don't have anything.
I could make one of my chars say again that "to open the safe you'd need a very precise demo man or a very skilled lockpicker", but I don't think it's necessary.
Was it not for the damaged aircraft, Emil would just jump in and fly, but sadly he can't.

Everything depends on the lone fighter pilot now: either he disables the engines and lets the ally vessel board the Goldfish, or he is shot down and we need to use the Shadow to broadside the hell out of the fugitive ship.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 06, 2016, 03:51:44 am
If I'm correct in my assumptions the Eagle's Shadow would not be fast enough to catch the ship, that said we do have a number of long range weapons, a single flak shell may not destroy the ship but it might shred the engines. Carn has our Anvalan Merc but I don't recall if he has it loaded on his ship and I also don't know what our escorts are equipped...
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 06, 2016, 04:04:07 am
Long range shelling is all it would need
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 06, 2016, 05:07:25 am
Been busy but I'll get to it. Also Carn has something in mind, I just haven't seen him
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 06, 2016, 05:33:02 am
"Carn has something in mind"

Ok, now everyone get some popcorn, lay back and enjoy the show: epicness is about to happen














Not to say that your all stories and events are epic, but Carn's events are
manly-explosively-brutally-Angleany epic.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 06, 2016, 01:12:59 pm
Well Carn it appears everything hinges on you posting... sometime in the future.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 07, 2016, 12:43:14 pm
Post in, apologies for the delay, been a shade busy with school.  I do have a plan, and I should have enough to go on to put it in effect my next post.  Also Pies, deny Alister permission to board.  If he would be a tad more agitated, it will make things splendid.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 08, 2016, 08:10:30 am
Eh no problem, so long as we don't go The Skies Have No Limits level of posting drought we'll be fine. But with four people posting regularly enough we should be fine.

Onto the actual on-going narrative I can't think of an an actual reason to give any of my characters a reason to deny Alister boarding. Davis doesn't particularly care about the prisoners, after all they're a bunch of raiders who tried to kill him and one of them is a psychopath who he would feel much safer without him on the ship, and most preferably dead. Reagan on the other hand doesn't have a reason to deny him either, more concerned with the retrieval of extremely valuable resources and while in a boarding action damage is more or less guaranteed so long as it's repairable she'll be fine. Now if she thought they couldn't handle the boarding action maybe she would deny them but:

1.) They have Alister.
2.) As far as I know they haven't raided the armory at any point and are mostly unarmed aside for the shipboard weapons, which despite being powerful are also useless in a boarding action once the party reaches the ship, and are also disablable.

Now the only character I can personally think of who would have an issue is Frey, because he would much prefer having the good doctor alive to get information out of. And knowing that Carn also doesn't like him would influence him to keep them away from each other in a combat situation.

And even if we recaptured him Reagan is liable to just shoot him dead rather than keep him alive.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 08, 2016, 08:23:17 am
Hmm fair point, I can make it work.  Alister needs to be under a high amount of stress for what I have planned.  The denial would make things easier, but I can still do it easily enough.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 08, 2016, 08:27:13 am
Now if Bdr would write Frey telling Alister not to board that would be much easier.

Anyways I have an idea for a short post so I'm going to get that in.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 08, 2016, 02:25:31 pm
Sooooo, to dramatic?  Otto revealed as a traitor, crew killed/injured, and hanging by a thread?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 08, 2016, 03:34:41 pm
Wait, who fell from the ship?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 08, 2016, 05:29:31 pm
Otto Smith, the traitor. But Alister is also dangling from his harness.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 08, 2016, 05:35:57 pm
So Mr.Smith is dead from the fall?
In case he is not, and we manage to recapture him, some scenic execution is in order
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 09, 2016, 06:08:49 pm
Yeah, I couldn't remember if we were over sand or water.  I consider him dead, nasty stab to the gut and falling overboard.  I thought it likely he would not want an autopsy done.  No chance at them examining the body and learning something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on April 11, 2016, 09:20:36 pm
They should be flying over water. Also Poe should I do the planes post or you?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on April 12, 2016, 04:21:01 pm
I seriously need to find for my characters some way to move in the skies (besides with the damaged plane for Emil).
They both enjoy being lazy asses, but now that things are tense and there would be need for some action it's becoming frustrating being grounded.

On a side note, it's good that Lord Ansager isn't in command of the Shadow, otherwise right now the massive air ship would be racing full speed ahead with engines screaming to catch up with the fugitives.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 13, 2016, 01:26:23 am
I've got this one, just gotta get to writing it.

Also Crow, I have no idea about your characters other proficiencies but they could join the gun crews or engineering teams.

But once we get all these craft repaired we'll have a total of 5 (6 Including Alexander, Richard, and Reagan's craft of course) available for flying and the various standard patrols we'll be doing (In fact they've seen more action than the rest of the cast) plus, once we get into uncharted lands they'll be off with expensive equipment to catalogue various landmarks ahead of the fleet in order facilitate "exploration" and "the pursuit of knowledge" as well as "the complete destruction of the birdmen's entire organization down to it's last and final supporter." Which should be fun.

Also with the rate we're bleeding extra parts for these planes we should probably pick up a lot of extras.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 19, 2016, 08:50:07 am
So do we let them escape?  Or recapture?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 19, 2016, 08:54:28 am
Sorry been kinda busy lately. Will get a post out hopefully later today.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 20, 2016, 05:27:54 am
DONE! FINALLY!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 20, 2016, 07:33:10 am
I never said anything about someone bringing the Squid back.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 20, 2016, 07:55:46 am
YOU'RE GODDAMN UNCONSCIOUS!

Now if you want to head back out you're technically still out there actually, plans were only put into motion and despite the few minutes that have elapsed all pieces on the board are still there.

Now whoever was still awake/not dead/not a dead traitor (And I'm assuming it's Jimmy) Is not exactly equipped to deal with this situation, who you very specifically described as a greenhorn, did what most people would consider reasonable and turned the ship around cause:

1.) He's wounded.
2.) You're unconscious.

That said you could very well turn this ship around (Literally) and go bust some heads if Alister is meant to wake up at this point.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on April 20, 2016, 02:22:01 pm
I also mentioned the helm got wrecked during Otto and Alister's fight.  However, let us pretend that the Squid was pointed in the direction of the ship, and the engines are still running.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 22, 2016, 01:43:58 pm
... Damn it I failed the fact check again.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on April 24, 2016, 10:51:41 am
So it anyone going to attempt to unscrew this?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on May 04, 2016, 07:00:31 pm
What I may try will either screw us (as if we aren't already quite screwed), or will totally unscrew the situation.
First off, does the Shadow have a steering wheel?
Secondly, can we compare the Shadow's top speed to a galleon's?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 04, 2016, 07:21:38 pm
Shadow is a rather massive ship and engineering is already strained despite the damage that we've already repaired. Also Reagan is at the helm and currently controlling the vessel. That said I have no idea how many engines we have nor our actual top speed, engineering can give us full speed but they have to build up to it, mostly so they can observe for problem spots in order to run bypasses. I also have a really bad idea.

We also need to stop putting ourselves in situations where the only people who can really do anything is me and Bdr, seriously, we have secondary characters for a reason, Carn you brought up Alexi way back why don't you take control of him from time to time?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on May 05, 2016, 03:00:58 am
Now, the Goldfish suffered engine damage that got it immobilised for a while, and then they got repaired.
Gameplay wise they would be in an optimal condition, but fluff wise? Could we say that since it suffered heavy damage on the engines, it has a lowered top speed?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 03:15:15 am
No idea, Bdr, Carn? Want to weigh in here? Shaded? Koali?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on May 06, 2016, 05:58:06 am
Sorry, long week. But I'm basing it off the photo you had earlier with two engines on top either side of the observation room of the weather deck near aft. Two more in the rear on the actual hull. With a transport being able to hold a galleon, it should be alightly faster but has to have time to get to its max speed. And yes the goldfish shroud have slight damage but is still able to move
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 03:34:49 pm
So four engines, assuming the ones on the wings are for maneuvering, and a top speed slightly akin to that of a galleon if not greater.

No wait, make that six engines.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on May 06, 2016, 03:42:29 pm
I mean these are big engines so they should have enough power to overtake a galleon
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 03:48:34 pm
We also have 6 of them.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on May 06, 2016, 03:58:08 pm
Would it be completely retarded for my char to ask to get the ship going all ahead full to reach Kasparov's position, and even get well within firing range of the damaged Goldfish?
If I do, and the propose is accepted, every engineer in charge of the engine room is going to try to spit in my dish at least once.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 04:02:37 pm
Depending on the outcome Lorena might just ban you from engineering outright, even if all goes well. No one touches her engines without her permission and she's already banned half the engineering staff.

Still, I've been itching for an excuse to give Regean a reason to pull out the seeker.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on May 06, 2016, 04:10:15 pm
Then it is set
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on May 06, 2016, 04:11:06 pm
Remember, sandstorm picked up in intensity. Visibility is low and last know position is lost. You have a damaged Squid with half of its crew gone, a Galleon having its weight limit reached and going sustainably slower, and two downed pilots in the storm. What to do
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on May 06, 2016, 04:21:02 pm
Somebody tell the galleon to drop all the crap recovered from my ship, I don't think reinforced prow armour is of any use now.
It wouldn't hurt one bit to try to shoot those recovered Heyoka missiles.
And w could get the chaladonian out again, if he isn't too busy.
And the meme is "wat do?"
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 04:28:47 pm
We could send Alexi after our pilots or send someone out in Ulric's ship to grab them. Ulric himself is busy with engineering though we could send him out with a provisional crew.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on May 06, 2016, 04:41:43 pm
I could, but it did suffer damage from the explosion. Unknown or known
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on May 06, 2016, 05:37:16 pm
Right I'm home and at a computer, I'll get a short post in.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on May 18, 2016, 10:52:10 am
OK, got a post in.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 11, 2016, 05:11:15 pm
Been putting this off for far too long, I'll get a post in a few hours.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 11, 2016, 09:25:34 pm
What would be the best way for me to work my way into the uncharted skies story? I have a Anglean character in mind.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 11, 2016, 11:17:29 pm
We have two ways of doing this, either your character is currently a member of the crew already, the easiest and for the moment prefered option that gets you right in, otherwise we'd have to wait till we reach another to get you in. We could do it with how Crow entered but I feel that the events surrounding that were a one time thing.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 12, 2016, 01:43:33 am
I have skimmed through the story but I haven't figured out what ships are included in the fleet. Could someone please list them. Thank you.
This will help me figure out where to join.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 12, 2016, 02:07:37 am
It's a five ship formation centered around the Eagle's Shadow, which serves as our fleet tender and flagship. No matter what you'd be on this ship as the other 4 vessels are capable of docking within it, allowing us to rotate crew and ships for rest cycles.
Here's the list of ships and their Captains.
Eagle's Shadow - Reagan Morgan
Kibeth, Squid - Alister Carn
Fifth Season, Junker - Ulric Culvin
Crimson Dragoon, Galleon - Alexi Kasparov
Tranquility, Goldfish - Reynard Larson
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on June 12, 2016, 05:54:11 pm
Give me an hour
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on June 12, 2016, 07:27:39 pm
So, Silver and others. Fast forward, different city and place for anyone looking to join. I know everyone has been busy, but please don't let Pie and I to make the plot points. If you have something we will write with it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 12, 2016, 09:50:31 pm
I fell asleep on my post, it's FINALLY OUT!
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 12, 2016, 10:55:12 pm
Alliance mode?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 12, 2016, 11:30:07 pm
Alliance mode?
Has no real bearing on the nature of the RP, things may appear from time to time from the DLC, we've already begun with Crow's laser, or was it the tesla cannon? It was something. But aside from equipment and ships that's all we're getting from it. The factions already existed prior to the DLC so that doesn't really count.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 12, 2016, 11:43:48 pm
What's finally out?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 13, 2016, 12:01:58 am
What's finally out?
Oh I see there's a bit of a disconnect, I was complaining about how I got my post out later than I had initially intended to.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on June 13, 2016, 07:35:41 am
Alliance mode?
Has no real bearing on the nature of the RP, things may appear from time to time from the DLC, we've already begun with Crow's laser, or was it the tesla cannon? It was something. But aside from equipment and ships that's all we're getting from it. The factions already existed prior to the DLC so that doesn't really count.
I believe it was the rockets from the Baronies.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on June 13, 2016, 06:37:26 pm
Silver, just a small thing, try not to use other's main characters as much. Need some cohesion and be in character.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on June 13, 2016, 07:52:40 pm
I'm tempted to write a comical double take as to how he got in Frey's quarters.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 13, 2016, 07:59:29 pm
I'm an enabler, do it! But Hold off for a bit, almost done with my post.

Edit: Post out, go nuts.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 13, 2016, 09:16:35 pm
Alright trying to figure out who is who. I needed someone who was in charge. But how well did I do Frey's personality.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on June 14, 2016, 06:23:19 pm
I think I found what Emil wrote in his letter to Frey

''Sent from: Lord Emil Maximillian Istvan Llewelyn Von Ansager, Guardian of Cainhurst, Protector of Cainhurst, Knight of Ravenrook, Captain of the King's Navy, Lieutenant of the King's Army, Paladin of the Crown, Agent of C.R.I.E.S., et cetera.
and
Selenia, Lieutenant of the King's Army, Agent of C.R.I.E.S., et cetera.

We, with great joy, want to ask to Mr. Frey of the Eagle's Shadow to let us and our companion join the crew of thy vessel, as we found great pleasure with our stay.
Also, methinks we are worthy companions for thy expedition, as our enemies are in common and many a nuisance they had caused to us all.
We recognize our first appearence might have caused quite the ruckus for a while.
Lord Ansager's presence might also have caused some problems.
He whishes to make ammend to his appearing and behaviour a la wild card.
Miss. Selenia humbly asks to be accepted as a gunner among the Eagle's crew, she believes that her natural ability to use well a gun and keep it functioning are to be respected as also her aim is as fine as her face.
Lord Von Ansager formally requests to be part of the Eagle's flight wing, if not as a pilot, at least as a backup one.
Also he asks to be welcomed among the crewmen as a cook and armsman too, as his cooking skills are as good as his prowess in fighting.
Also, we, with utmost sorrow, grieve on the losses the ship has suffered, and as such we are willing to spare some of our fortune to the cause, to help get the ship ready, the planes in the air, the food on the tables and the men at work.

The Baronies send their regards.
''

There was also a raven sigil on the letter, apparently.

Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on June 19, 2016, 03:18:03 pm
lol, Carn we are down to around 2 and a half with Reagan's craft
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 19, 2016, 03:20:07 pm
Actually we have 3 excluding Reagan's.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on June 19, 2016, 04:10:04 pm
i counted the squid as half, it is still flying but heavily damaged
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 19, 2016, 04:25:40 pm
Oh I thought we were talking about planes there. Still, my point stands. I should finish my post in a bit though.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on June 19, 2016, 05:39:10 pm
Optimistic omitting to cover up for my memory lapse, anyways, mercenaries, used to be told better odds then they have (or at least we can make interesting dialogue concerning that), anyways, the influx of engineers should serve to lighten some strain.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 20, 2016, 03:57:11 pm
So uh, lost my post to a browser crash and didn't save the hard copy I had, will be rewriting it.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on June 20, 2016, 04:27:04 pm
Ouch......
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on June 22, 2016, 03:25:43 pm
Finally finished rewriting it, had to cut some of the other perspectives I was planning on writing but this big chunk was really hard to write and I just wanted it done, I'll write up the other things I was planning and post them later.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on June 27, 2016, 01:21:14 pm
I am temporarily resurrected to tell you that I'm not 100% dead.
I didn't post for a while, and I'm not gonna post for a little longer, due to some shenanigans.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on June 27, 2016, 01:36:37 pm
I feel like I should tell you Mr. Owl is a smuggler. And I'm planning a sub plot around that. I don't what best practice is for introducing it. Also open to suggestions.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 01, 2016, 12:28:31 am
Mostly I'd say it depends on what the subplot entails. Are we going to get followed? Pissed off former employers coming after us? Someone infiltrating the crew to get at you? In most cases slow and steady, a few inner monologue bits about what the hell is going on. Your character's opinion on the ship etc.

Also should I post something or does someone else have anything planned?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: BdrLineAzn on July 01, 2016, 04:16:25 pm
I may time skip, but other than that nothing else.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 01, 2016, 04:53:26 pm
I suppose I'll write up the other half of the post I originally meant to write, less important stuff than Davis displaying his survivalist tendencies. If it's not up tomorrow feel free to timeskip into Oblivion.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 02, 2016, 08:23:28 am
I'm fine with a jump to tomorrow, I've got nothing for this day, unless Ulric wants to continue conversing with Alison.  I do have ideas for the next day though.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on July 05, 2016, 05:52:08 pm
Could I create a subplot about Mr. Owl trying to steal the blood?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 05, 2016, 06:45:21 pm
That depends, do you want Alison to hunt him down? Also not even Alister knows about it, the only ones outside of the Anglean deep science groups who know about it are Alison and Ulric.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on July 06, 2016, 05:37:26 pm
I guess I'm asking how do you feel about it? Would you want to have that or leave him as a smuggler that didn't decide to risk jeopardizing his position with the new crew.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 06, 2016, 10:16:50 pm
Considering that you asked first, I can run with it. You will have to fabricate a reason why he knows about the blood, and that it is worth stealing. I can't promise Alison and Alister won't stir things up if he does though.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Silver Corsair on July 07, 2016, 12:40:20 pm
Currently he believes he's trying to steal a drug similar to a steroid. Not that steroids have been invented.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on July 07, 2016, 01:42:53 pm
But what reason does he have for thinking it's on the ship?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on July 11, 2016, 07:52:59 am
I'll tell you why
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: C r o w on July 11, 2016, 07:54:00 am
Also, scrap my previously proposed idea, I forgot how I wanted to articulate it
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on July 20, 2016, 12:22:16 am
I need to post something.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on October 16, 2016, 11:15:39 pm
Looks like I need to dust off the old draft I was working on... Excuse me I'll be a day or two.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 25, 2017, 03:26:42 pm
So, I admit to having a long unexplained absence (personal life got in the way). I want to apologise for that. Considering that the last post in here and the cantina thread was months ago, I take it the story is cancelled?
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Piemanlives on January 25, 2017, 07:44:03 pm
I don't know? Border told me I was in charge but no one has been around in a while, I've attempted to write a post but with two people we might not get anywhere. We'll see if the others chime in and I might dust off the draft I'd been working on.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Carn on January 25, 2017, 07:54:02 pm
Alright then, just checking.
Title: Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
Post by: Koali on March 21, 2017, 06:25:39 pm
I may open up a Monster Hunter / GoIO crossover RP, but I don't know how many people on here actually play Monster Hunter.