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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #30 on: July 18, 2015, 09:04:18 am »
I could see it at the bow, it opens up and there is a gangplank that drop down into the initial hold. Behind that a large bulkhead with several entrances to catwalks that expands across where it stores the ships.

Yeah I think we may need a schematic/blue print.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #31 on: July 18, 2015, 01:21:42 pm »
So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #32 on: July 18, 2015, 01:28:56 pm »
So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.
Koali, Carn and Alison are both extremely agro. Though they express it differently. Example, if there's a wall they need to get past, Alsion prefers to climb over and kill any guards along the way. Carn prefers to just blow a hole in the wall and walk in.
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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #33 on: July 19, 2015, 08:35:28 am »
I suddenly remembered that Amelia comes from a prominent family, as such I've made her a fair bit more formal when she speaks to people she's unfamiliar with, people of authority etc.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #34 on: July 19, 2015, 12:47:43 pm »
In case anyone wants a more descriptive feel for Jasper, think Hannibal Lector, but replace "cannibal" with "I want to open you up and change how you work."

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #35 on: July 19, 2015, 12:59:19 pm »
So Bonesaw?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #36 on: July 19, 2015, 01:13:48 pm »
Don't know that one. Jasper is a medical genius, well versed in psychology, and dabbles in genetics. And extremely sociopathic.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #37 on: July 19, 2015, 06:49:48 pm »
Well character discussions aside we're going to have to end this day eventually, my characters cannot forward the narrative any more then they have without someone else interacting with them.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #38 on: July 19, 2015, 06:56:53 pm »
Alison is wandering the ship. Possible run in with Reagan?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #39 on: July 19, 2015, 07:08:58 pm »
On it, sorry went to a concert yesterday, it was awesome by the way. Hehe Slighty Stoopid and the Dirty Heads, hehe

Also, transport name, what is it?

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #40 on: July 19, 2015, 07:10:57 pm »
I vote Wayward Winds.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #41 on: July 19, 2015, 07:22:39 pm »
Lets think representive, we're hunting birds after all.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #42 on: July 19, 2015, 07:25:05 pm »
It's also taking us REALLY REALLY far away, wayward.

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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #43 on: July 19, 2015, 07:27:00 pm »
But we need to slight them.

Also just had an idea for a post.
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Re: Cantina Writing Discussions
« Reply #44 on: July 19, 2015, 07:45:18 pm »
Well it depends on when and why the ship was originally constructed, it hasn't been said yet if this is its first mission. Also, is Amelia's pet/thing some kind of baby sky octopus?