I dig the second montage man. Good work. Flow is very good. I'm a bit too dazed right now, but I
think you were trying to match the changes of scenes with the beat of background music which is a nice trick I use frequently in my videos. (if not - try it, I think it's worth the trouble to synchro those)
I don't know what program do you use to edit, but generally it's a good idea to use fade in's and fade out's on sound tracks to make things like for example the ending of that second video smoother to both watch and hear, because as of now it feels cut down even though you have a fade out on visuals in the end. But yeah, more of a nitpicking than anything.
Also, I didn't know you can spectate right over someone's shoulder. How do you do that?
Good job man.
I'll feature your vid at the end of my new GOIO video, just need to finish my exam session to get down to it.
Edit: I have just read the description on your video.