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BdrLineAzn:
I could see it at the bow, it opens up and there is a gangplank that drop down into the initial hold. Behind that a large bulkhead with several entrances to catwalks that expands across where it stores the ships.
Yeah I think we may need a schematic/blue print.
Koali:
So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.
Carn:
--- Quote from: Koali on July 18, 2015, 01:21:42 pm ---So evidently violence is therapeutic for Carn.
--- End quote ---
Koali, Carn and Alison are both extremely agro. Though they express it differently. Example, if there's a wall they need to get past, Alsion prefers to climb over and kill any guards along the way. Carn prefers to just blow a hole in the wall and walk in.
Piemanlives:
I suddenly remembered that Amelia comes from a prominent family, as such I've made her a fair bit more formal when she speaks to people she's unfamiliar with, people of authority etc.
Carn:
In case anyone wants a more descriptive feel for Jasper, think Hannibal Lector, but replace "cannibal" with "I want to open you up and change how you work."
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