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Gabriel and the Icarus

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Axius:
I wrote a short story-ish thing about Gabriel's journey at the beginning of the year. I meant to use as a script for when I played it on YouTube (https://www.youtube.com/axius15 *nudge* *nudge* *wink* *wink*), but I've been horribly ill for the last year and 4 months (really sucks) so I haven't been able to film it, but it's still a really good read. Here it is: http://bit.ly/13EvEZq

It's still a work in progress (been 10 months and still not done :P). I really hate "The Nomads at Ellius" but I'm yet to think of anything better. If you want to, please provide feedback. This story uses my better writing style so I think it'll be fine, but I can always use opinions. Hope you enjoy :D

Schwalbe:

--- Quote from: Ceresbane on December 03, 2014, 02:46:06 am ---but the story is lacking some sort of antagonist. During his journey he had bandits and pirates. But at this point no one was apparently interested in the labyrinth.

Maybe some dark secret was found in the labyrinth. One where Gabriel believed needed to be sealed but was stolen away by bandits. iunno.

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I suppose that hostile enviroment is pretty good antagonist (example: well, shit. All survival games. By if I had to pick two: NeoScavenger, Darkwood).

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