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Offline Tanya Phenole

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The Bloody Wrench
« on: August 26, 2014, 12:39:35 pm »


No junker pilots suffered during drawing this.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2014, 12:43:27 pm »
Remind me to never fly with you...

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #2 on: August 26, 2014, 12:46:03 pm »
Remind me to never fly with you...

AW COME ON

Rubber mallet is soft enough!

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #3 on: August 26, 2014, 12:52:13 pm »
I really like the dramatic hair swoosh in the 3rd panel though.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #4 on: August 26, 2014, 02:20:10 pm »
*salutes*
Great job.
Must be all engineers that get pent-up rage.
Serves them right for telling us to fix the hull for the 16th time ahaha.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2014, 06:03:31 pm »
The wrench position in the third frame is a little out of whack. In the 1st and 4th frames the wrench lines up with the direction of her right hand's knuckles, where as in the 3rd frame it is turned 90 degrees to its original orientation. From the body pose it looks like she is going to swing horizontally yet the wrench is almost vertical. Since the hips and torso are at dramaticaly different angles, I would expect to see some crease lines in the outfit around the waist/lower torso.

Please don't hit me.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #6 on: August 26, 2014, 10:51:28 pm »
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The wrench position in the third frame is a little out of whack. In the 1st and 4th frames the wrench lines up with the direction of her right hand's knuckles, where as in the 3rd frame it is turned 90 degrees to its original orientation. From the body pose it looks like she is going to swing horizontally yet the wrench is almost vertical.

Dude, it is girly swing. I used myself and mirror as reference


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Since the hips and torso are at dramaticaly different angles, I would expect to see some crease lines in the outfit around the waist/lower torso.
If you look attentively - it is corset. Corsets bend on waist, but there are no crease , cause it is thick. 

Also it is comic and it was not supposed to achieve anything artistically XD 
« Last Edit: August 26, 2014, 11:14:17 pm by Phenole »

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #7 on: August 26, 2014, 11:06:01 pm »
You seem to have accidentally most of your post.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #8 on: August 26, 2014, 11:14:50 pm »
You seem to have accidentally most of your post.

thanks, wrote a wrong tag accidentally )

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #9 on: August 27, 2014, 11:17:19 am »
Reminds me of Bioshock Infinite.

Corsets have the panda seal of approval =o

I think you did a great job, one thing I noticed is the hands in the last panel (perhaps because of perspective), her left hand looks so much bigger than the right. Maybe its the fingerless glove and wrapping around the wrench though, idk.

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #10 on: August 27, 2014, 11:44:38 am »
*SWINGS WRENCH*

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #11 on: August 27, 2014, 01:00:12 pm »
You wouldn't hit a panda  :'(

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Re: The Bloody Wrench
« Reply #12 on: August 27, 2014, 03:42:09 pm »
I am just threatening ^^