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GoI haikus
Gryphos:
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 24, 2014, 02:51:49 am ---Loaded Loch Nagar Rounds.
I yell at the pilot;
the gun died.
--- End quote ---
6,6,3
Coldcurse, are you even trying?
HamsterIV:
Some folk get a thrill,
from breaking the haiku form.
They have no respect.
Coldcurse:
--- Quote from: Gryphos Felldawning on January 24, 2014, 10:44:30 am ---
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 24, 2014, 02:51:49 am ---Loaded Loch Nagar Rounds.
I yell at the pilot;
the gun died.
--- End quote ---
6,6,3
Coldcurse, are you even trying?
--- End quote ---
(5-6-5)
I do try my best,
but I did it wrong. (I think wrong is 2 syllables)
Let me try again.
five six five,
I just counted.
Got happy.
(3-4-3 by the way)
ramjamslam:
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 27, 2014, 03:43:48 am ---
--- Quote from: Gryphos Felldawning on January 24, 2014, 10:44:30 am ---
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 24, 2014, 02:51:49 am ---Loaded Loch Nagar Rounds.
I yell at the pilot;
the gun died.
--- End quote ---
6,6,3
Coldcurse, are you even trying?
--- End quote ---
(5-6-5)
I do try my best,
but I did it wrong. (I think wrong is 2 syllables)
Let me try again.
five six five,
I just counted.
Got happy.
(3-4-3 by the way)
--- End quote ---
ha ha ha ha ha,
I am laughing so hard now.
But why hate us though?
Coldcurse:
--- Quote from: ramjamslam on January 27, 2014, 03:57:33 am ---
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 27, 2014, 03:43:48 am ---
--- Quote from: Gryphos Felldawning on January 24, 2014, 10:44:30 am ---
--- Quote from: Coldcurse on January 24, 2014, 02:51:49 am ---Loaded Loch Nagar Rounds.
I yell at the pilot;
the gun died.
--- End quote ---
6,6,3
Coldcurse, are you even trying?
--- End quote ---
(5-6-5)
I do try my best,
but I did it wrong. (I think wrong is 2 syllables)
Let me try again.
five six five,
I just counted.
Got happy.
(3-4-3 by the way)
--- End quote ---
ha ha ha ha ha,
I am laughing so hard now.
But why hate us though?
--- End quote ---
damn forgot its 5-7-5 not 5-6-5 uhm...
I correct myself,
and did horrible again.
I will get better.
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