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ramjamslam:
Need to fix the hull.
Too late we are going down!
...the hull seems fine now

Coldcurse:
When I spot you,
You don't worry.
You are dead.

ramjamslam:
Muse have a new game
and they are going mobile!
*does the hamster dance*

ramjamslam:
slight changes to make this one 5/7/5:


--- Quote from: Captain Coldcurse on January 15, 2014, 02:32:49 am ---When you are spotted
there is no need to worry
because you are dead.

--- End quote ---

I hope you don't mind me converting these to the common Haiku form.  Please let me know if you do.

Coldcurse:

--- Quote from: ramjamslam on January 15, 2014, 09:28:54 am ---slight changes to make this one 5/7/5:


--- Quote from: Captain Coldcurse on January 15, 2014, 02:32:49 am ---When you are spotted
there is no need to worry
because you are dead.

--- End quote ---

Please don't mind me
When I convert your incorrect haiku
It's my personal fetish.
 
--- End quote ---

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