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Lt. Morgan:
Ok so it has been a while, and with a new name change! (people had problems pronouncing the other one so it seemed a good idea) .

SO my finals are over and I am in the process of updating the images I have. Here is the final version of the mk1 ship:



With that said, I hope you enjoy. The review of my project by my fellow classmates was given a mixed review. Some thought it was good, while others thought I should take the class again. Just another reminder that people in this world are crazy.

Lord Dick Tim:
When faced with a diversity of criticism its good if I discover the root of each observation rather than their generalization.  This can help me form a better idea of whether or not the  criticism is useful to me or not.
For example, if I write a short story with the intent to explore a kind of syntax or language form like Old Victorian.  If a criticism is about the story itself, that is not useful to me, though I do file it away for consideration when I intend to write a complete story.  If the critic expressed a problem with my verb form or word usage being out of period, like the wrong costume at a play, then this is of concern to me and can be used to improve my writing.

I can't judge what you've made, I don't understand the context of the class.  If it was to simply render a shape using multiple textures that casts a shadow and has the appearance of actual varnished pine (Serious, it looks like a very nice table I built years ago, I can see the grain wave from thin varnish gloss very nice touch) then this is a success.

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